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Reviews for Hidden Intentions

By : imera
  • From thrnbrooke on September 26, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 10!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 08, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 9! Ron is an arse!
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  • From Jan on September 08, 2008
    Why does Ron always has to be an arse! Gods, I hope Harry gives him hell and makes him crawl to him for forgiveness!

    Oh!!!! I can't wait to see what Harry and Draco are going to be up to tonight! I hope it's something really, really yummy!!! ^_~

    Please update chapter 9 soon ^_^

    Jan

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  • From thrnbrooke on September 02, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 8! Looks like Ron didn't do his job as keeper!
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  • From Jan on August 29, 2008
    For English being your third language, I think you've done a great job so far! I should know seeing as English is my second language... which I've started learning since 2001! And I still make lots of mistakes! ^_~

    As for the story! Love it! I can't wait to see what's to happen next! Poor Harry, I wonder what Draco's going to do to him next when he comes out of the hospital wing!

    Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From xtrooperx on August 21, 2008
    this story is amazing!! pls continue it :)
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  • From ANON - Hitori on August 21, 2008
    But I do enjoy the story, please continue. ^^b
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  • From ANON - Hitori on August 21, 2008
    The thing in your mouth is a tongue, not a tong.
    You keep your anger in check, not shock.
    And Harry was pinned to the wall, I don't think it's possible to be pined to a wall.
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  • From anniea on August 20, 2008
    wow please update soon *kisses*
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  • From ANON - Clau on August 10, 2008
    nice so far :)

    One question though : shouldn't Snape know the way past the Womping Willow? Hasn't he seen how to go pass it from Remus in book 3? Furthermore, Harry would know that Snape is in on the secret. In that case, why would Harry suggest a hiding place he knows one of their enemy can easily access?
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 29, 2008
    Smooth Draco! Real smooth! Soooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From delfina87 on July 29, 2008
    I wonder how Draco's going to calm Harry down, i cant wait for the next chapter! update soon!
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  • From Visitkarte on July 29, 2008
    Well, three chapters long planning to hide Draco in Shrieking Jack are just two chapters too much. Besides, Snape knows how to get there, why not tell him at once? Harry is not stupid, he would have to hide him at Grimmauld Place 12, that's a real hideout, not Shrieking Jack. Try to cut it shorter or at least concentrate it to less chapters, you are repeating things. Keep on writing, practice makes you get better!
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  • From Visitkarte on July 29, 2008
    *What will Harry do when he discovers Lucius is ordered to kill Draco, help him of course.* LOL, the funniest line ever! I don't think you meant what you wrote: That Harry would help Lucius to kill Draco...

    And now I'll start reading the story, I hope you will correct that funny summary...


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  • From ANON - Silverkitten on July 26, 2008
    Well, there are some grammer mistakes, but it seems promising. The biggest thing I can tell you, is to make the way they speak more in character. I will keep my eye out for this, and you should update soon!!
    xoxo
    Silverkitten
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