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By : tsorg

From margaritama on February 15, 2009
they're making babies...they're making babies....oh yea!

so Sev was touched. I could completely see this man awkwardly holding a little baby and completely at a loss until he took one good look at the little person in his arms. I cried for Sev.
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From twinsie on February 15, 2009
LMAO at "BBD" - it makes it sound like Luscious Lucius is underwear! Oh wait, that's BVD, isn't it? LOL I also like "DB" ... Deatheater Boy ... has a nice ring to it ... kinda like Wonder Boy ... superhero-ish. LMAO

I thought that was so sweet that Severus was all choked up after finding out about his namesake. I often wondered about how the dour potions professor would take it (had he lived). I think you did it justice and brownie points to you for keeping him alive, by the way (I don't think I've mentioned that yet). =P

Looking forward to the next one. XD Great job!!!
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From Scarybearhair on February 15, 2009
Chapter 14

Green is my favorite color. And I have to laugh about Lucius taking charge. It almost sounds like he is trying to order you, the author, around.
Good luck on that. LOL

Anyway this was an incredibly hot chapter! I love how Hermione is just dumbstruck at first.
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From LiteraryBeauty on February 15, 2009
I'm so relieved and thrilled you loved Jane Eyre, and I feel like a total slacker compared to you! However do you get so much done? I guess I can explain how I get *nothing* done, and it involves this website... :) The ending of Jane Eyre was really unusual for the time, which has a lot to do with its continuing popularity. If you ever come across a book called Wide Sargasso Sea by Rhys, you might be interested in it as well. It tells the untold story of Rochester's wife in the attic, and how she became to be mad. It's very interesting!

If you need another project (which I'm sure you don't, but once I find a person to recommend literature to, I'm afraid I cannot be contained!), check out Vanity Fair by William Makepeace Thackeray. It stars the inestimable Becky Sharp, the heroine that made imperfect heroines interesting.

Now onto this new chapter! I loved every bit of it and smiled like a fool throughout. I giggled at Hermione's "traitorous body", oh, how I've been there! And the image of little blonde hellraisers cracked me up, especially Hermione's most likely inaccurate assertion that the children will be Gryffindors...sorry hun, I think Lucius' delicious jeans...I mean GENES...will, as you say, breed true.
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From voraciousreader on February 14, 2009
Sweet, but not diabetically so, I liked the interplay between the men. So hard to realize when kids grow up on you. In my mind I still see my nephew as a skinny kid, and then I turn around and there is a six'3 ex-military in my kitchen! LOL! So, little Malfoys with tricksy parents--poor kids, they'll never get away with anything, Mum and Dad have done it all already!
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From Heidi191976 on February 14, 2009
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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From jessirose85 on February 14, 2009
that was a great chapter xxxx

I loved Sev's expression when he found out Albus' full name xxx
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From ann1245679 on February 14, 2009
CUTE!CUTE!CUTE! Thumbs up. Smut next right? ^ ^
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From Scarybearhair on February 14, 2009
chapter 13

That
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From Scarybearhair on February 13, 2009
Chapter 12

Woohoo! I have been waiting for when Lucius decided to spank her! I loved it too! I guess Hermione can
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From Scarybearhair on February 13, 2009
Chapter 11

LOL!!! I wasn
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From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on February 12, 2009
What?! What?! no...No...NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I can't have reached the end of your updates already! I can't have! Oh my God! What will I do? How will I cope? Ughhhhawwwwww.....

I think you are a fantastic storyteller, and I appreciate your fic. Thank you so much and please update soon!
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From Scarybearhair on February 12, 2009
Chapter 10

Aw poor Hermione. She cried herself to sleep. I can imagine this would be overwhelming for her. Her whole life has been turned upside-down. I am sure though, Hermione will eventually see the fringe benefits to all of this. LOL!

That was sweet the way Lucius carried her to his bed all snug-a-bug. *swoon*

I love how nonchalant Draco is about everything, drinking his coffee. It
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From Scarybearhair on February 12, 2009
Chapter 9

How funny! So Lucius was rather miffed that Hermione took off without him. I think he better get used to it. I don
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From Scarybearhair on February 12, 2009
Chapter 8

Woohoo! Yes you do write lovely smut. I love how Lucius just takes control too. It makes me swoon.

And I had to laugh when Hermione snuck off to do her shopping without her new hubby! Lucius was one step a head of her calling Madam Malkin.. Sometimes I wonder if it bothers Hermione more that he is trying to pick her clothes or that he outsmarted her. LOL

Lovely chapter my dear!

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