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Reviews for Diamond in the Rough

By : tsorg
  • From Quiranna on February 09, 2009
    LMAO...OMG we have prolly read some of the same stories! Lmao. Too Much is saved in my favorites lol. Hot hot hot...and is it just me, but does amanuensis sound either really dirty or like one of those really graphoc medical terms? I know the definition, but it still sounds very strange to me...I seem to be on a Law and Order SVU kick...I mean seriously WTF? I'm also fond of the few HP/HG/DM stories there are out there. I loved what a witch needs! I'm a fan of one of your readers actually La Bibliographe? She's awesome, completely awesome! Excellent installment by the way...so when is Hermione gonna get one of those little bundles of joy?
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 09, 2009

    Chapter 24: Those two have now wandered into kinky territory and it looks like they both love being there. Hermione is probably going to visit all the implements Lucius keeps in his closet sooner or later. She
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  • From margaritama on February 09, 2009
    Girl - that was probably the hottest scene to date. I love how they can just still lose all inhibitions and admit their feelings. I like this side of Lucius, he's not too sappy but he loves his wife. I loved the baby naming. Sev needs some attention and this was so touching of Harry. I think he just rose a notch in Lucius' book.

    Hmm, Hermione preggers - yeah Lucius you old, sexy, bad-ass dog! :-)
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  • From zephyr1975 on February 09, 2009
    Oh wow i am seriously loving this fic..

    Chapter 4 -- THe fight scene was genius from the charm on the stairs to the way Lucius thwarted Hermione.

    Chapter 19 -- I seriously want Hermione's lingerie.. oh boy oh boy!!!
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  • From twinsie on February 09, 2009
    Oh wow! I stumbled upon this story completely by accident, and now I'm glad I did. I love marriage law stories, but Lucius and Hermione makes it even more interesting ... not to mention juice-say (that's definitely more than juicy). XD

    Great job ... can't wait for the next update.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on February 09, 2009
    I loved it! Excellent update! I can't wait to see if she does or doesn't get pregnant. Keep up the good work and update when you can
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  • From lilashannah on February 08, 2009
    Every time you up date I end up reading the whole story from the start.
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 08, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From jessirose85 on February 08, 2009
    That was great...cannot wait for Severus' reaction as well xxx

    It's nice to think that Lucius is thinking of children in the future xxx
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  • From OUFAN on February 08, 2009
    So the TOY WALL was put to good use. Who knew "Big Bad" could be so hot. GREAT CHAPTER.
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  • From celesumi on February 08, 2009
    ooooo....the spanking was just amazing :) hermione is getting brave in taunting dear old lucius! and the blondie comment cracked me up! i can just see hermione pulling his hair..and dear old lucius having a bit of a fetish for that too :) lucius being all paternal makes me thing there's gonna be a baby soon! :) gotta love those malfoy tots!
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  • From ann1245679 on February 08, 2009
    YAY. Thank you, thank you, thank you! That was a good chapter. First the smut then the humor then the sweetness at the end when he imagines curl-haired babies. I think hes totally hooked on her. ^ ^
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  • From LiteraryBeauty on February 08, 2009
    How, how do you find time to read Jane Eyre, AND write the most delicious smut of all time? You are otherworldly!

    Rochester is definitely one of my favourite classical heroes, he is exactly the prototype for characters like Snape, and definitely your rendition of Lucius. And it only gets better! It's a bumpy road for Jane, but what satisfying story has only happiness? As Jane Austen once said, writing obstacles is easier than writing happiness; once you get to the happiness, the story is over.

    Anyway, I'm so glad you like it! I always get nervous when recommending books because everyone's taste is so different, but just from your writing style I knew it was something you'd appreciate.

    Lovely new chapter, full of smutty goodness just the way I like! :) And I had the biggest grin on my face when picturing those blonde, curly-haired babies Lucius was dreaming of! What a sap!

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From voraciousreader on February 08, 2009
    Cruel, so cruel of you, but I loved it! LOL. Severus will have NO idea how to react that a despised Potter has been named after him, but at leat we all appreciate our potions master, don't we?
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on February 08, 2009
    Totally awsome, I can't to see what idea you might write about them extending their family, does he ask, does it just happen, does she ask, or something totally different. I can't wiat to find out.
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