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Reviews for Diamond in the Rough

By : tsorg
  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on February 03, 2009
    Wow! And don't make any excuses. They aren't needed. After all anticipation is the spice in the dish and from what I can see it's going to be a very hot dish in deed! Excellent work and please update as soon as you can.
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 03, 2009

    Chapter 21: Hermione has fallen in love, but isn
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  • From PensievePerson on February 03, 2009
    I liked the latest chapter and felt the need to review this time. You did a good job describing the atmosphere of Lucius's closet. I imagine he is something of a clotheshorse! Severus is more in the story now, and it's getting tense between them (albeit in a different way than with Lucius). I wonder if the nitpicking of Severus will go further. It was smart to leave on a cliffhanger, as it probably generates more reviews! Update soon hun!
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  • From voraciousreader on February 02, 2009
    You do great visuals, I can tell you that. That image of Lucius is gonna haunt me for a while. Eagerly awaiting more!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 02, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Scarybearhair on February 01, 2009
    Chapter 7

    Yes, Lucius definitely is trying to run Hermione
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  • From Scarybearhair on February 01, 2009
    Chapter 6

    ROFL! That cracks me up that LaBib suggested a clown suit. Yes I think that would irritate are imperious Lord Malfoy. :D

    I am glad to see Hermione standing up to Lucius, otherwise I think he would walk all over her, buring her clothes, the nerve. LOL
    I had to laugh at this line. Goddess, she was a bossy little thing. Yes that sounds like Lucius. I think that is why it
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  • From Scarybearhair on February 01, 2009
    Chapter 5

    I just love it! Your story is so much fun! And I want you to know, I haven
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  • From Quiranna on January 31, 2009
    Very well done...can't wait for the next chapter * slobber, slavers and just generally makes a mess til you get back here with more*
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  • From OUFAN on January 31, 2009
    Ok, I have never really been a Lucius/Hermione fan, but I love this story. I read all of it tonight, because I just couldn't walk away. I hope you continue, I really would like to see how Lucius would handle having another kid. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From crysta656 on January 30, 2009
    Fantastic story! I am loving it!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 29, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From LaBibliographe on January 26, 2009

    Chapter 20: Wow! You do write some glorious smut. Lucius is scrumptious as the master in their marriage, dealing with her bad behavior with a firm punishment followed by an even more firm f**king. And then, Part Two! I had to turn on the air conditioner and it
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  • From LaBibliographe on January 26, 2009

    Chapter 19: Hermione isn
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  • From margaritama on January 26, 2009
    "Her big, bad death eater loved her, was in love with her, was in fact, her true love." AWWW!

    Ok, that man is hot - and he loves to spank doesn't he? This was such a sweet chapter where he clearly shows his love but also his dominance. LOL - lucky Hermione. So impatient - sometimes slow is good.

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