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Reviews for Diamond in the Rough

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From Clare1984 on January 25, 2009
ooh perfect chapter - true love and hot sex - is there anything better? umm, yes, Lucius trussed up naked and just waiting to be played with! I just love this story so much.

Thanks for reviewing my hot dramione story, I have to admit I loved writing it. What is about those Malfoy men, eh?
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From Heidi191976 on January 25, 2009
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
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From celesumi on January 25, 2009
what i wouldn't give to have lucius to tell me he loves me! i greatly enjoyed the new chapter and love how lucius can be endearing when he wants to be :) i think i do with a lucius in my life applying spakings and whatnot ;)
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From Scarybearhair on January 25, 2009
Chapter 4

LOLOL! Aw this was great! Hermione is not going down without a fight. She is so bound and determined to tick Lucius off, isn
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From LiteraryBeauty on January 25, 2009
If you're a sucker for happy endings (and without giving too much away!) please PLEASE read Jane Eyre by Emily Bronte! That single book alone shaped my life in confusing and wonderful ways, so much that I am planning to my do Masters on some concepts found in the book. It truly is literature at its best.

ON TO THE GOOD STUFF! Amazing new chapter, love the affectionate and happy Lucius! He is just so damn scrumptious! I'd love to have him installed in my shower...AHEM.

I like the new twist with the married magic, it's unique and adds something special to the story, a tangible expression and proof of their love. Excellent new chapter!
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From voraciousreader on January 25, 2009
I would still love to see Severus try to get out of a match. His sneaky mind gives all sorts of ideas for twists and turns! And the idea of him coming to Lucius for marital advice makes me grin. Lovley chapter, sweet and hot at the same time.
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From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2009
You continue making my boring day. Lol. Great story. I don't get bored of reading it when I don't have something fun to do. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon...in like a day. Lol. Great job! Especially the sex scenes and fluff in this chapter was utterly amazing. I wish I had a sexy EX deatheater. lol. Great job once again!

Lady Serpentina
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From Scarybearhair on January 24, 2009
Chapter 3

How funny, like father, like son. I love how they are sitting by the fire, drinking Firewhiskey in fancy tumblers, contemplating Miss Granger
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From Scarybearhair on January 24, 2009
Chapter 2

Mmmmm, so is that dream of the silver and green snakes a metaphor for being entangled with Lucius in bed? LOL
This is getting better!

Kingsley is rather an ass isn
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From Scarybearhair on January 24, 2009
Chapter 1

Finally I got to start reading this. I have been bombarded at work. :(
I just knew this was going to be good though. I love marriage law fics.

It seems poor Hermione has cut herself off from the world and has become a hermit. Doesn
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From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2009
This is one of the best stories I've read this new year. I love it. You simply made my boring day. I wish I were in Hermione's shoes. Lucky witch. *saucy wink.* Lol. Great job! I have a question: is hermione going to have a blond little wizard anytime soon? Children are part of the contract...or twins? Great job! Update soon.

Lady Serpentina
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From catysmom1028 on January 23, 2009
I like it. please update soon.

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From LiteraryBeauty on January 21, 2009
Haven't seen Dangerous Beauty, I'll look out for it though! I'm a huge Jane Austen buff as well, though I must admit I prefer the more passionate writings of Emily and Charlotte Bronte. Enough cluttering up your review section with that though!

I adored this new update, a mischevious Snape plus a clever Hermione and a bested Lucius can only end in deliciousness! Can't wait to hear more about this married magic, sounds like a really interesting concept.
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From Clare1984 on January 20, 2009
I love this! Well done cos it is the perfect mix of cool story and hot lovely smuttiness, yum! I love Lumione and this is one of the best I've ever read. Mmm, I want some big, bad death eater please!
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From celesumi on January 20, 2009
ahaha....seems that the hermione is picking up a thing or two from those sneaky death eaters :) i can totally picture it in my mind that snape would interfere a bit with the two of them :) can't wait to see what happens to hermione once lucius catches her! yay!
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