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Reviews for Diamond in the Rough

By : tsorg
  • From Mystique887 on January 19, 2009
    Just got done reading ch19, for the record such a corset is known as an underbust corset.
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  • From gtbioteach on January 19, 2009
    Oh, wow. This is really good!!
    I read it all in just a few days. Can't wait for an update!!
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  • From Quiranna on January 19, 2009
    Wonderful! Keep it up! I can't wait for another round.
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  • From voraciousreader on January 18, 2009
    Whew! I hoped I hadn't offended you in some way. S'ok. Still, if you can find the short stories of Saki, I highly recommend them!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on January 18, 2009
    what a mischivieous snape. Wow, sounds like he knew what was going on. I can't wait for more. Totally enjoying this story.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 18, 2009
    A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2009
    Nice one, I like how sneaky Sev is. Make him take the test, I want to see who matches with him? If you like Oscar Wilde and enjoy a bit of dark comedy, you should try a short story writer called 'Saki', real name H.H.Munro. Cynical and very funny.
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  • From margaritama on January 18, 2009
    Horny Lucius....wow, I suspected it might have been true love.

    It has be both ways so I hope Hermione realizes that.
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  • From godblessemohair on January 17, 2009
    Oh man! Kinda a cliff hanger. I'm so curious about that light now. By the way, I love this story, one of my favorites that I check updates for everyday. Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From Quiranna on January 13, 2009
    *Pokes the fan fiction author* You're very good, and you have certainly reeled me in on this one. Keep it up and I will be on tenterhooks until you come back with more.
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  • From LiteraryBeauty on January 10, 2009
    Thank you for the compliment on my username! I'm a huge literature fan, mostly the classics, mostly 19th century, and I remember saying to one of my professors that there is no beauty like literary beauty; and thus a username was born!

    I loved this new chapter. I absolutely adore your depiction of Lucius, he is exactly as I picture him in my head. As always, love the story and my breath is bated for more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 09, 2009
    A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From lilmissmichelle on January 09, 2009
    really really good chapter!!!!
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  • From voraciousreader on January 08, 2009
    That was great! I loved they way you delineated their emotions and the insecurities she was feeling. I can understand her confusion, and his need to reassure her through the most developed connection they have. As much fun as they've been having, sooner or later they actually are going to have to talk to each other, aren't they? Never mind me, I'm still fanning myself and trying to get my scrambled wits back in order, I found the chapter incredibly hot.
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  • From margaritama on January 08, 2009
    I love dom Lucius to submissive Hermione. Oh yes, those games are beyond hot. This was a hot chapter for sure, the smexy smuttiness was so delicious. Find me a bathroom quick! LOL

    However, there was also alot of emotion. I thought Hermione was going to get sloshed so she could numb herself. Glad you didn't go that route. She's so overwhelmed by what she feels its breaking my heart. Its so obvious that Lucius loves her - at least to the reader. Really, he's nearly obsessed with her. He wants her to be happy and not do with out, he wants to take care of her - overbearing yes but also amazingly sweet.

    That glow is one of two things: pregnancy or sign of true love. Not sure which but I loved it.
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