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By : tsorg
  • From jessirose85 on September 21, 2008
    ooo! i smell a lemon coming??? 10/10 for the whole chappie
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  • From chickaboo on September 20, 2008
    Yay! You updated! I've missed this story! I can't wait for more....I can't wait to see if Lucius catches Hermione....and what happens if he does....though I can hazard a guess. LOL Hope you update again soon!!
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  • From Shalengreh on September 20, 2008
    giggles...that cant end well....
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  • From Citten on September 20, 2008
    Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!! an update! well the race is on! i cant wait to see what he does when he catches her! ;) my personal oppion though she is just a little too stubborn for me, why cant she just be greatful for the gifts and accept them--though i have no problem with telling him they are not neccessary. (i would like to evenually like to know what was in the gift.) okay that is my two knots worth. :) also loved that lucius saw that she had been crying and was sweet enough to carry her into his bedroom, though if i can guess your lucius right she will not have that bed for very long if he has his way. :) which is fine with me! :) i am really looking forward to lots more and i do hope it is really soon.
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  • From voraciousreader on September 20, 2008
    I like the humor, please update soon!
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 21, 2008
    Chapter 9: Hmmm, Lucius likes his flavors. Did he indulge outside his marriage to Narcissa? Or was it all before he married her? If so, he must have packed in quite a lot before he wed when he was young. Ah, or after Narcissa died? Frisky fellow!

    What with the time-turner and assorted other
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  • From on August 18, 2008
    Her temper needs taken in hand???? Um, I think Lucius needs a lesson in real women! Hi there old man, we actually have brains! I'd say he needs taken in hand - I'm sure Hermione is the girl for that job *evil smirk* Please tell me I'm right... please?
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  • From chickaboo on August 18, 2008
    Oh Lucius. He needs to stop and remember that Hermione is a Gryffindor....you know, the opposite of a Slytherin? lol Great update, I can't wait for more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 18, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more to see if Lucius and Hermione can work past this little disagreement.
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  • From CoCoM on August 18, 2008
    Aww, he is an arrogant arse, but what a SEXY arrogant arse, right? Right? *wink, wink*
    It's okay that they got irritated with each other-that makes making up all that much better. They will have to learn to compromise, obviously. However, Lucius is Lucius and I don't see him totally giving up control for anyone.
    Looking forward to another update soon.
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  • From Citten on August 18, 2008
    well at least she made him stop and think... even if it has only annoyed him more. :) i really want more of this and i am just going to enjoy it--whatever happens, i know it will be great! :) why is it that some men just dont get it--there are just somethings a woman likes to do for herself or that we like to be involed in decisions-together. well one thing i will say is i would like to see lucius' reaction to hermione's tears (i think i am trying to give you a suttle hit here-though the dicision is up to you.) i will be waiting for the next chapter, so PLEASE POST SOON!!!!! :)
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  • From jocat on August 18, 2008
    Hey I just found your story and have really enjoyed it so far. I love a strong Hermonie so this story really works for me. Looking forward to the next update.. Toodles
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 17, 2008
    Chapter 8: Oh my, did she do to him what I think she did? Hermione! I wouldn
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 17, 2008
    Chapter 7: Oooh, your description of Lucius as he stood in the doorway to Hermione
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 15, 2008
    T - You have to cut the URL for Hermione's dress at least in half. It is making the story so wide I can't read your chapter. Whenever someone puts an unbroken line of anything in a story, the print stretches that wide according to the techies for this site. I want to read the story. Can you fix the URL, pretty please? Many thanks in advance.


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