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Reviews for Diamond in the Rough

By : tsorg
  • From Citten on August 15, 2008
    okay i have just caught up to where you are in the story. i love it!!!!!!!!! i love lucius being the domonering one and hermione takes it to some small degree but fights him the whole way. :) i am really looking froward to lots more of this story! i really really hope that you have lots and lots planned! i have one request, would you put either a bit more space or some kind of symoble to seperate the gaps or change of sences. (example it jumps from her night bath to the next day at work a paragraph below but i just keep thinking that it is more of the same sence and it takes me a minute and i read it twice, but i just thaught it might help--thanks.) :) i really am looking forward to the next chapter!!!! post soon!!! :)
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  • From Sampdoria on August 11, 2008
    Yup, I really like this story:-))
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 11, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From chickaboo on August 11, 2008
    Oh Hermione. Don't you know Lucius ALWAYS has the last say? lol Great update, I can't wait for more!!
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  • From Persephone3655 on August 10, 2008
    Lol, damn snarky possesive and domineering bastard. Can't wait for Hermione to put him in his place.
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  • From Larrabee on August 10, 2008
    I love the premise to this story. But I feel like Hermione is taking it lying down. And letting him mold her like his one personal doll. idk.
    But I can't wait for more.
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  • From CoCoM on August 10, 2008
    Yah for the consummation! Hermione is such a lucky witch. I can't wait to read about all of the creative ways she can take Lucius down a peg or two. *insert fan-girl giggle here*
    P.S. Glad to hear I am not a total freak show with my "Poppet" fascination! (I noticed it made another appearance in this chapter and I liked it....A LO' !)
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  • From Bloodsrose on August 10, 2008
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    I don't know if I'm loving this.

    Lucius is just absolutely ridiculous and Kingsley being such a complete ass about this law towards Hermione. And having Hermione strip in chapter 5...

    It does have its great moments but for me Hermione just seems to be sitting back and taking it. And when she's not fighting, she's swooning over Lucius. However, no other reviewers seem to think this. So I fully intend to keep going and see what you have happen next.
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 10, 2008
    This was a wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From tambrathegreat on August 10, 2008
    I loved the clown suit comment. And thanks for making Hermione make an effort. It wouldn't be fair to either of them if she tried to sabotage herself at her wedding. I loved when Draco said his piece about her looks. IT was kind of gratifying to have him say that.
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  • From tambrathegreat on August 10, 2008
    WHat a way to begin negotiations for a wedding. I loved it, the hexing, the jinxing the sexual tension and Lucius dishevelled. That was a great chapter.

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  • From tambrathegreat on August 10, 2008
    Cnapter 3:

    I love Hermione's dinner ensemble. It will put a kink in Lucius' plans, I'm sure. It sounds like he might have bitten off more than he can chew by threatening Hermione.


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  • From tambrathegreat on August 10, 2008
    You've caught Lucius' hauteur perfectly. I do hope that he will develop some feeling for Hermione outside the ways he can use her. I loved the bit where she asked the test to be retaken. It was classic Hermione.


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  • From tambrathegreat on August 10, 2008
    God, I 'm a sucker for Marriage Law fics, especially well written ones. This one starts with a bang. I can't wait to read more.

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  • From catysmom1028 on August 09, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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