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Reviews for Diamond in the Rough

By : tsorg
  • From chickaboo on August 09, 2008
    That was great! You know I've always been a firm believer that Hermione and Lucius have very good sexual chemistry. I mean, can you imagine all the super hot angry sex? Not to mention the make up sex? lol I can't wait for more!!
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  • From britclogger562 on August 07, 2008
    I absolutely love your story so far, your writing is excellent and a joy to read. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 31, 2008
    An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From CoCoM on July 31, 2008
    I was torn between laughing and gasping in horror when Lucius set all of her clothes on fire! (It was a bit of a strange sound that ended up coming out) I am not too torn up about it though as of course, it means she has to get all new, fabulous clothing to take its place. Wow, what a hardship that is going to be. Glad to see that Hermione did end up doing herself up nicely for the wedding. You know it's a good sign when your future son-in-law, who is your age no less, thinks you look gorgeous. Go Hermione!
    P.S. For some reason loved the line where Lucius said "Temper Poppet"....*fans self*...I am weird, I know. LOL
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 30, 2008
    Chapter 6: Well, the fight may be on, but the combatants look like they will both win in the end (my favorite kind of story).

    The wizard may be beautiful, but he needs lessons in tact. He never learned the aphorism,
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  • From LadyFabulous on July 29, 2008
    Another fantastic chapter! I'm interested to see what's going to happen on the wedding day!
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 28, 2008
    Chapter 5: Yikes, he
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 28, 2008
    Chapter 4: Malfoy Manor is beautiful, but its formality makes it a bit cold. I hope Hermione hots it up one way or another. I like the description of his library. I
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 28, 2008
    Chapter 3: Yay! Hermione is starting to find a way to fight back. Mr. Snobby Malfoy isn
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 28, 2008
    Chapter 2: I like how you give us a detailed understanding of Hermione
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 28, 2008
    Chapter 1: This story may be about a classic idea, the Marriage Law, but you've handled it spectacularly so far. I adore your crafty Slytherin Lucius. And giving us a complete view of Hermione, with her dusty personality and desire to burrow into obscurity in juxtaposition to Lucius, who has landed on his elegantly shod feet as usual...well, I'm very intrigued and want to begin Chapter 2 now. Excuse me, please. Great job!
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  • From Sampdoria on July 27, 2008
    This is so brilliant!!!! I just love a story that are humourous and sexy at the same time, and this story sure is both!!! It should be needless to say that I look forward to read more:-)))
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 27, 2008
    Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From CoCoM on July 27, 2008
    Please update....like Now! No pressure, really, just my sanity on the line. No biggie.
    Another great chapter. What I wouldn't give to have Mr. Malfoy draped across my bed, waiting for for me at the end of the day.*sigh*
    Can't wait for the wedding and then the consummation!
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  • From CoCoM on July 26, 2008
    Oh no, I would completely HATE it if Lucius were to throw me over his shoulder, smack my bum and then want to take me to his bedchamber. *gasp* Horror of all horrors! Hehe.
    Great chapter. I only have one more to go and hope that you are planning an update ASAP
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