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Reviews for Diamond in the Rough

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  • From CoCoM on July 26, 2008
    Uh oh, I don't think Lucius is going to like this very much....
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  • From CoCoM on July 26, 2008
    Oh, snippy Hermione and condescending Lucius: Love it! LOL. And him and that can *fans self*
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  • From CoCoM on July 26, 2008
    Very intriguing beginning! I am loving that there is some substance to this fic (now, don't get me wrong, a PWP definitely serves it's purpose but sometimes we need a bit more). Lucius's last line of the first chapter was excellent.
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  • From on July 26, 2008
    Will Lucius ever get over himself? I'm pretty sure Hermione won't be happy with his constant bullying! Sure, he'd be great in bed, but who needs someone telling them what to do all the time? She's held her own against Voldie - I just can't see her giving in because he's hot. He needs a reality check!!!
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  • From AlexandraMalfoy on July 26, 2008
    Can you hear me laughing? It was fantastic. I LOVED that fighting scene in the hallway. And picturing Lucius picking up Moine at her jeans and throwing her over his shoulder while slapping her bud it hilarious! Please go on with that story. I can't wait forthe update. Oh my, Moine in Lucius bedroom? That's a tricky one. I hope they won't have sex just now. It would be too cool to keep the tension between them for a bit longer.
    So keep on writing and LOL, Alex
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  • From Persephone3655 on July 26, 2008
    This is getting really interesting. I can't wait to see teh fireworks in the next chapter.
    And yeah, I would hate to have to be with someone that had really stringent ideas on proper female etiquette.

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  • From Heidi191976 on July 26, 2008
    An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From LadyFabulous on July 26, 2008
    Yay... another great chapter! I loved it all... Hermione throwing her glass into the fireplace, then mimicking Ron's table manners (LOL) and then she tops it off by throwing a table at Lucius... that was brilliant! Lucius certainly has taken on a challenge hasn't he?! I wonder how he is going to react to all of this... update!
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  • From kitten224 on July 26, 2008
    !!!!*sniffles* I hate u T^T u stop it at the bestest part XP
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  • From wicraven on July 25, 2008
    I have to say, I reallly looooved this chapter, I'm still laughing...Hermione's great, I can't believe old luci lasted as long as he did, can't wait for the next chapter, hope it's soon, I'll be looking for it...thanks.
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  • From chickaboo on July 25, 2008
    Oh my that was too funny. But uh-oh. Lucius has her wand and believes that they need to have a "chat". In his bedroom. I am only aware of one particular "chat" that takes place in such a location. lol Great update, I can't wait for more and I hope you update again soon!!
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  • From on July 25, 2008
    Oh god, I love her spirit! Please... please please please don't let him crush it! Please, let this be a story where she shows him she will not feel bad about herself! I adore Lucius/Hermione - but really, she is so strong - why would she give into his demands? I hope the next scene shows his outraged reaction to her attire/attitude. Maybe he'll actually see that this woman cannot be controlled, bought, or sold. I can't wait for more!
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  • From chickaboo on July 25, 2008
    OH my gosh. I was laughing so hard when I read what Hermione put on for dinner. Go Hermione. Show that pompous prick whose boss. lol Great update, I can't wait for more and I really hope that you update again soon!!
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  • From AlexandraMalfoy on July 25, 2008
    My, my, isn't that a look? I'm sooooo curious about Lucius' reaction to her style. I guess he will boil like water in a kettle. Lovely! He deserves this little ugly display of her dislike. Can't wait for the next chapter.
    LOL, Alex
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 25, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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