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Reviews for Diamond in the Rough

By : tsorg
  • From Heidi191976 on July 25, 2008
    Excellent. I can't wait to see Lucius' reaction to Hermione's outfit when she gets to the Manor. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From LadyFabulous on July 25, 2008
    LMAO!!! Go Hermione, I can't wait for Lucius' reaction!
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  • From LCGrabski on July 25, 2008
    I am "pumped" for the dinner scene. What luck though that you updated so quickly. I really am quite addicted to your words.
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  • From helenesnape on July 25, 2008
    Ah! The 'I'm entitled to everything I want' Lucius rears his very pretty, but very self-centered head. I hope Hermione lets him have it with both barrels when they have dinner at the Manor. He deserves to have some of his arrogance handed back to him.

    Your story has an exciting twist to the Marriage Law. I like it! I'm anxious for the next update.
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  • From AlexandraMalfoy on July 24, 2008
    What an arrogant prat, isn't he? And so damn sexy and masculine. Oh god, how I wish my test would match with his. I'm curious what's up next. Thanks for this chapter. I was stuffed with loads of emotions and a nice read.
    LOL, Alex
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 24, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't believe that Lucius is threatening to get Hermione fired if she doesn't marry him. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
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  • From LCGrabski on July 24, 2008
    I am not so patiently waiting the next installment of this delicious piece of fiction. I like it, more than like it, I dare say I love it. I have to say that your story is the first that I've read where Lucious maintains his haughty attitude to a T. So far I can't stand him and I sympathize greatly with Hermione so I'm now doubly excited to see where everything will lead from the second chapter. I'll definitely keep my eye on this one.

    Happy writing!
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  • From Persephone3655 on July 23, 2008
    Oooh you have to love a defiant Hermione, otherwise she wouldn't be the Hermione we all know and love.

    Keep the updates coming.
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  • From AlexandraMalfoy on July 22, 2008
    That sounds really promising. The marriage law-plot is one of my favorites. And I like the idea that Lucius is actually picking Moine out. Please carry on and update soon.
    LOL, Alex
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  • From chickaboo on July 22, 2008
    This is great! I'm addicted to MLC stories and so far this promises to be a wonderful one! I can't wait for more, hope you update soon!
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 22, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From kitty08 on July 22, 2008
    wow a very good start and i hope you will update soon!!!
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  • From Persephone3655 on July 22, 2008
    This is a really interesting take. Usually you see both of them matched up against their will. He actively pursuing her is kind of fun.
    Please update.
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 21, 2008
    This is an excellent start. I look forward to readng more.
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  • From crinna on July 21, 2008
    ooooooo more please. i hope this wasn't a one shot. i love the internal dialog of Lucius. i would ha loved to hear the conversation between he and a drunken Draco(tehehe). i will be looking forward to any additions to this fic. good job
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