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Reviews for Diamond in the Rough

By : tsorg

From Quiranna on March 08, 2009
Lol, funny I hope my insomnia goes on a backburner too lol. But whatever. It'll do what it do. And yes you have managed to make me puddle. You see this is mine, thats mine, thats mine, definitely claimed that, that too...this could be awhile lol. I have thouroughly marked your little forum room lol. Excellent chapter and I can't wait to find out who Sev's mate is *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* Lmao. I have my thoughts and my uspects, but this should be rather exciting! I will not let my cat out of the bag though on who I think it is...thats your bottle of bubbly to open! Lol. Come back soon!
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From LaBibliographe on March 07, 2009

Chapter 27: This is funny
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From limapickle on March 06, 2009
I can't wait to find out who Severus has been matched with.
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From lilashannah on March 06, 2009
Ok,who the heck did you give my Severus Snape to?It's bad enough when I have to share with Hermione.
Once again you have blow me away with your talent.You make everybody come to life,I love it! Now really who did you give my Severus to?
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From MegNutz on March 05, 2009
omg omg omg who is it?!?!?! I need to know. good chapter! I got on as soon as I got off of work and had to make the HARD choice of reading or doing homework......guess which one won??? can't wait until the next one hope its soon!!!
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From HarryGinny4eva on March 05, 2009
Pansy? Lavender? A cheesed off Molly? (Is Arthur still alive?) Who who who who? lol Yes, I am still enjoying this story immensely. And yes, I still think Lucius is going to loose a finger if he keeps messing with her food. ha ha ha But, poor Sevvie, his match is as hardcore as he is. lol Can't wait to find out who it is...

Thanks! HG4eva
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From Heidi191976 on March 05, 2009
Very evil cliffhanger. I can't wait to see who Severus is paired with. I hope that whoever it is, he will be able to control her somewhat after seeing the way she was dressed and was acting.
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From vbruce on March 05, 2009
My guess is Severus got matched with Pansy. Just a notion. As always, very entertaining.
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From Citten on March 05, 2009
YOU ARE SO VERY EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe (wait yes i can) that you would do that to your faithful and loving readers and reviews!!!!! okay you better be making things up to us by posting the next chapter and very, very, VERY soon! :) love draco's humor! ;) boy lucius could drive some one to drink or at least be sleeping on the couch (or in his case alone.)
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From margaritama on March 05, 2009
T babe you are hilarious: Kir Royale...ah, he should have brought you the bottle straight up, wonder what you would have produced then? LOL

Okay, so who is this mystery girl...hm, someone I'm sure we know as you left us clues and she's a rebel okay I bit here are my guesses: Pansy, Millie, Marietta, Angelina or 'sweet' Katie Bell. I'm guessing she used to be one of his students by her comment. Keep us on our toes.

I really loved Sev in this chapter. His temper barely controlled yet he so desperately doesn't want to be alone. Part happy, part horrified, part bewildered, part annoyed and part challenged....I think he's in for a roller coaster.

Love Luc's annoying little "daddy wanna be" treatment - perfect contrast to Draco's endearing snarkiness. So Hermione's baby will be the aunt/uncle to Draco's baby - so weird! LOL

Okay, I'm requesting some role play with Luc and Hermione -- she's preggers not dead. Hide the computer from the little one.
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From voraciousreader on March 05, 2009
LOL! This should be one hell of a ride. Poor Severus! Doesn't know what hi him, does he?
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From catysmom1028 on March 05, 2009
I like it. Please update soon.
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From twinsie on March 05, 2009
Oh evil cliffhanger ... evil ... evil!!! Who the hell is it?

I'll bake you cookies if you update with a quickness. *grins*
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From Scarybearhair on March 05, 2009
OMG! Yes I can imagine quite easily getting an attitude adjustment like the one Hermione got in chapter 20. It makes me all warm and swoony. LOL
Man, you write hot smut! :D

Anyhoo, on to chapter 22

I was laughing at this:

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From Sampdoria on March 05, 2009
I am not sure if I should thank you for the update or throw some tomatoes at you for not revealing just who you have paired Severus with:-) I do know that I like the girl though, she sounds absolutely perfect to "rock" Severus stony ground:-))
Do update again soon, preferably with a name.......:-))
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