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By : tsorg
  • From chickaboo on March 05, 2009
    But that's so mean. Get back here!!
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  • From Scarybearhair on March 02, 2009
    Chapter 21

    Ha ha
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  • From Quiranna on March 02, 2009
    The practicing of the baby making is good....*drool* You know, I've lost count of the puddles I have left in this here space of yours...I'm almost positive I have marked this space as my own lol. Rather frightening that...I have to say, the cutting up her food? THAT was brilliantly funny! I can just imagine that too...Independent bookworm struggling with over protective alpha male...Who will win? Watch what happens... Lmao.And now the stalking and prowling begins...I should really go to bed...I'm rambling babbling and doing all sorts of things that could be termed " Symptoms of sleep deprivation" Damn insomnia...Btw, I checked out that sight....thank you thank you thank you for telling me about it! Lol...excellent puddle inducing smut!
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  • From mlui on March 01, 2009
    I guess you can't change Lucius too much; he's always going to be domineering and controlling to some aspects. I'd be annoyed if he did that to me, especially with the food. Huh, is Hermione going to get cravings and drive Lucius mad at all hours. That'd be funny to see. I can't wait to see who Snape is paired with. I really liked the Draco and Hermione banters, and how Lucius seems to be out of the loop most of the time when they banter. Great story so far, and please update again soon! =)
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  • From twinsie on March 01, 2009
    Who wouldn't love a chocolate covered Lucius? Hell, I wouldn't mind having that for my dessert all day everyday. Of course, my ass would grow to ginormous proportions (LOL), but I'm sure with the ehem 'workout' ... it wouldn't matter so much. Hermione's one lucky bitch. LMAO
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  • From ElvisJesse on February 27, 2009
    Great chapter!! Hee hee! That is so funny with Lucius driving Hermione crazy, and not just in a good way. He seems like he would be a very protectice father. Great job, and I can't wait for more.
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 27, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From LiteraryBeauty on February 26, 2009
    Vanity Fair the movie is quite good as well, Reese Witherspoon can do no wrong in my eyes. The book will most definitely lend a lot to your reading experience though. I saw the film first, then read the book and watched the movie again and I gleaned a lot more from the second viewing. If you can't find time for the book, however (which no one in their right mind would hold against you, what with all these lovely updates!) the movie is worth watching independently.

    Such a cute chapter! Lucius' foibles regarding the pregnancy had me cracking up, I could definitely see that overprotective nature in the way he treats Hermione, and I can just picture how indulgent he will be with his adorable like platinum-blonde offspring! And Hermione whilst pregnant is just too funny...

    LOL at Snape avoiding the Ministry's summons! If only he knew I was right here, waiting for a proposal...surely my husband would understand? :)
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  • From jessirose85 on February 26, 2009
    I loved the smut in this chapter xxx

    I hope you have someone nice to match Sev with xxx

    Please add more soon xx
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 26, 2009

    Chapter 26: Snickering here. I see Lucius as oversolicitous and needlessly controlling of Hermione
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 26, 2009

    Chapter 25: The sentence about Hermione really being a hellion instead of just the sweet girl one supposes, struck a chord with me. I fully agree. She has many facets and uses whichever one suits the moment.

    Oh my, the tension in the Potter living room is thick as a Cornwall fog. Snape
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  • From Citten on February 26, 2009
    :( you said the worst part that you are almost finished! :( But i so do love the story that i cant get too mad i just hope that you will continue to write more wonderful stories! :) well lucius will be lucius--though i think he would have been somewhat like he is with her even if he had not read the books!!! :) it is just lucius' nature with her to be some what controling. :) but face it. it is one of the things we love about him. i do hope that you do NOT rush too much of the pregancy i want to enjoy some of too!!! :) i do hope that you are feeling better, i hate being sick! and no worries i loved the sense you wrote it was wonderful in many ways.
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  • From margaritama on February 26, 2009
    Oh my goodness, I couldn't stop laughing at the opening. And the Cool Whip was ingenious...have you been catching 9 1/2 Weeks re-runs on TV? I did and it reminded me how HOT Mickey Rourke was, DAMN that man was fine.

    You really focused on dialogue in this chapter (apart from the Luc-Lovin) and it was well done. I love how you captured Hermione's multi-thinking while she's being fitted. And a pair of pregger jeans is so appropriate for her.

    Thanks for the beta love - you are a wonderful writer to work with.
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 26, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Sampdoria on February 26, 2009
    Lovely update as always! I hope you will let us know who Severus will be paired with, even if this is a Lucius/Hermione story?
    I look forward to read more!!!
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