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  • From RogueMudblood on May 16, 2012
    It was an interesting journey. Thank you for sharing it.
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  • From LadyMcManus on March 26, 2011
    Sadly I'm the type who doesn't review every chapter, but the type who reads it all first.
    And for that I say forgive me. :)
    I am IN love with this fic, you have taken this far beyond what I was expecting.
    You have captured character and personality with a finesse I am admittedly jealous of!
    I love the Dom/Domme thing you have going! The switch between the two had me reeling, but a good reeling!
    I don't find fics often that capture my total interest, but you have done just that.
    Good on you, I look forward to reading more!
    -LadyMcManus

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  • From purefaith91 on October 22, 2010
    Loved it! I had guessed that poor Snape got stuck with Pansy. (wonder if they argued all the way to the train). Anyway, lots of fun. Thanks for sharing. p
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  • From purefaith91 on October 22, 2010
    Oh boy, did LM just find out how he is going to get his little wife back into the mainstream and get recognition? He can put her with SS to make new and exciting discoveries together.
    A pretty rookie mistake letting HM catch him nodding at anyone, much less a reporter. Loving your story. p
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  • From purefaith91 on October 22, 2010
    Truly enjoying your story. I was kind of hoping that when Hermione bound him, she would put him in jeans and a t-shirt. I find myself smiling at this when I am not laughing. Thanks for a great read. p
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  • From shadowchsr on August 04, 2010
    This was a very fun read. Though I do admit to expecting a bit more angst in the beginning just due to both Hermione's and Lucius' nature. All the intimate moments were very very steamy, and I'm sure made all of your readers squirm in their seats and then jump their significant others if available. The epilogue had me giggling through most of it, though I didn't care for the name of Margarita. It really is a pretty name and I do like that it means pearl, but I just can't help associating it with the drink, margarita. (which is one of my favorite drinks to make) So that's just my own association throwing me off with it.

    One of your comments did get me thinking, what would have happened if Hermione was sorted into Slytherin? How would that have changed things in the world of harry potter? I think in order for harry to have defeated Voldermort, he would need Hermione's help so I think he would have to be sorted to slytherin as well. I can just imagine how much more trouble they could have caused or how snape would have treated harry differently if sorted into his own house. Though I'd worry over Hermione a bit, as she was muggleborn and if most of her house would treat her poorly because of it.

    I've always thought the whole pure blood idea ridiculous anyway. Hermione is proof that magic can evolve from non-magical families. It also supports my theory that all magical beings evolved from muggles. And the fact that magical families can produce squibs is also proof that magic is not certain because of bloodlines. If anything, the only questionable offspring are children from a magical and non-magical parent. I remember Seamus Finnigan kept blowing things up his first year, even with a proper wand, as if his magic was harder for him to learn to control at least as a child. He blew up a feather just trying to levitate it. And i'm rambling, sorry, just a bit of food for thought. One of these days, I'd love to see a story that revealed the evolution of witches and wizards and how they came about. I'd love to see it turn wizarding society on it's heads in regards to blood status of any kind.
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on May 25, 2010
    That was my favorite part of this story! I'm reading this again by the way. It happens to be one of my favorites :)
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  • From TheLadyMeow on April 01, 2010
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  • From joejonasfans4225 on December 30, 2009
    i love it, love it, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! You are an incredible writer.
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  • From curlyjor on December 19, 2009
    Love the story! Read it in like 2 days... I love marriage law stories and I don't think I'v ever read Hermione/Lucius one! Well done :)
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on August 18, 2009
    Awesome story thanks for sharing this with the masses
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  • From FemmeBono on July 21, 2009
    Ohhhh that was nice. So perfect it might have been tied up in a little bow. Loved the lascivious Lucius. Loved the snarky Snape. Loved it! It's great when a story can keep the characters' personalities true and still make them fall in love.
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  • From LiteraryBeauty on July 08, 2009
    *faints from awesomeness*

    This has got to be one of the best epilogues I've ever read. I love the children! They are all so mischievous and yet totally true to form. The descriptions of the Granger-Malfoy kids, especially Nerissa the little Gryffindor, were perfect.

    And the little flirt between Margarita and James was very nice! Loved it. Lucius will so not be pleased. I hope Xavier is Ravenclaw, someone needs to put Lucius in his place! LOL

    Love that Hermione is still shy and blushing after all these years. She's somehow managed to retain her innocence, despite the constant corruption of her husband!

    I absolutely loved this story and while I am sad to see it end, I know it has to. It's one of the stories that convinced me to start writing, and I'll always see it as one of the first real fics that began my foray into the fanfiction world. So thank you so much for that, and for taking the time to write such an engaging tale.
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  • From LiteraryBeauty on July 08, 2009
    I can't believe I'm only just getting around to reviewing this. I think I've read it three times now. Anyway, it's such a beautiful chapter, such a perfect ending for an amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us!

    I especially loved the closing line. Very poignant and a nice tie-in with the books. Lovely. And the baby's name- very cute and nice homage! LOL

    The sex scene was hot as well, but the labour was really sweet. Overprotective Lucius is always fun!
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  • From chickaboo on July 06, 2009
    Awwwww, I loved it! I loved it all. I can't wait for your next story!
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