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Reviews for Broomsticks and The Wizards Gauntlet

By : TempestLore
  • From blondpierogi on August 07, 2008
    great chapter... keep up the wonderful work.. cannot wait to read more!!1
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  • From starrynite45 on August 07, 2008
    that's sooo hot lol finally Luke discovered cause of increasing squib population...can't wait for next chap! Wanna read about Scorp's concert now!!! plz!!
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  • From smmz79 on August 06, 2008
    OMG what a great chap.... i love it i can not believe this is almost over... i love the way you write draco and hermione... i think you mentioned in one of the earlier chaps that you were thinking about adding on to the scorpion kiss/dark fire stories... i think you should those tho were great as well... ok so i loved the end of this hermione and dracos love making was sooo sweet and it told of their love... and natheniel is a tricky little thing... oh and my fave line in this chap was.. when scorpius and luke were talking about blowjobs and luke was negative about them and scorpius was like just wait you will be begging for one one day and then you will know that women have your nuts in a vice that was rich
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  • From ANON - Apple on August 06, 2008
    I can't wait for the next chapter! I love your story and how you area able to keep multiple characters stories going in each chapter and keep them all tied together. Thank you for such a wonderful distraction you've kept me from throwing my computer out the window these last few weeks :D fortunately my classes end on Friday so I get a 2 week break! Yippy!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2008
    Hey jenny its mariah the new chap was amazing. Draco so hot. Will there be another story at the end of this.well love this keep writing. Believe in the readers and they will show their love. Bye for now
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  • From RyGirl824 on August 04, 2008
    Oh, more, please please please?!
    This was a great chapter! Go kick some ass, 'Mione! Set your Dragon free! :D
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  • From starrynite45 on August 04, 2008
    WOW! love this chap very, very much!!! like how Luke and Lily made out, haha & Hermione on solicitor action :D i'm a law student myself and court is kinda my life since i was born (my family is lawyer family lol) okay, get to the point, i really love that!!! can't wait to see Scorpious's campaign :)

    have a good day!
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  • From blondpierogi on August 03, 2008
    wow awesome chapter!!!!
    wonderful job! cannot wait to read more!
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  • From RyGirl824 on August 03, 2008
    Wonderful!!!! I can't wait for a new chapter, I'm dying to know how Draco does, and how Mione and Nathanial and everyone can help get him out.

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2008
    Hey jenny its mariah this chapter was great. Poor draco all disheveled its so upsetting. I love the new hermione she looks like she can kick ass. Nathaniel is so cool. Poor luke slaving away in the basement and scorp and persephone planning a rally all by them selves. When ewill drew tell damien the truth about the baby. Update soon.
    believe in the readers and they will show they love u.
    Bye
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  • From starrynite45 on August 03, 2008
    Very great chaps! such an adventure! really love this especially the scene of Ron and his car, and Nathaniel. Keep going!
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  • From smmz79 on August 02, 2008
    AAAH poor draco i just want to hug him..... way to go nathaniel flying as a large raven how very cool.... wow you go hermione now she is sounding very similar to what she was like in the second edition to this series... they have definitely messed with the wrong witch...
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2008
    Hey jenny its mariah thank u so much for the compliment. This was an amazing chapter.
    Poor draco now in azkeban its so upsetting. Poor little jessie how will she take not being with her uncle draco. Nathaniel is so fucking cool that he can transform into a raven I love it.how will dracos kids handle the new that their father is in jail.well I love this chapter udate soon possibly asap.will u make another story in this series it would be wonderful if u did butr no pressure.
    Believe in the readers and they will show they love you and this story.
    Bye
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  • From smmz79 on August 02, 2008
    well the one thing that i have to say about you and your stories is that they are NEVER dull..... i am always sitting on the edge of my seat thinking what the hell is she taking us through now... do not get me wrong i love every minute of it... I just want to say thank you for foreshadowing the azkaban thing i know i would have been freaking out if i had not known it was coming.... and i am glad that you got hermione and nathienal going to rescue draco instead of sitting and waiting like the others when has hermione ever sat and waited... ok so that is all i can think of ohh no i loved that draco was carrying hermione through the mud bc he thought she was wearing her wedding dress that was rich.... ok seriously update bc i have to know how they get draco out of this i am sure it will be interesting and keep us on the edge of our seats
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2008
    Hey its mariah again
    I just read the 14th chapter and it was amazing.will luna and the kids get out ok?I love the fairies.they seem so pretty.I just read it cuase I just got breaking dawn at midnight so yea
    Update soon
    Believe in the readers and they will show their love
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