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Reviews for Broomsticks and The Wizards Gauntlet

By : TempestLore
  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2008
    Her its mariah amazing 13th chapter . I loved it
    Poor draco all alone in the house.
    Belive in your readers and they will show they love u.update soon
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  • From starrynite45 on August 02, 2008
    wow, i love those 2 chaps! really exciting and adventure lol yeah, yeah i really love that! cant wait for next chap, as u said it would be the huge one! keep updating!!! plz!! :)

    have a good day!
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  • From blondpierogi on August 02, 2008
    ooh great chapter. wow the Guntlet was awesome. very creative!! i cannot wait to read more!
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  • From smmz79 on August 02, 2008
    OMG i do not even know where to start... i just love how you write.... one minute we think one thing then the next you have us going in a total different direction but i believe that you once said that things are not as the always seem...... love what you are doing with luke... i love his personality.... and i like that you have dragged damien into this story as well nice... oh and scorpius and sapphire(i am just going to call her my his nickname for her bc i always forget how to spell it when i get to the reviews.) they are a great little match i love that he is now with someone a lot like his mom and i remember in the 4 th installment( i think? please forgive me if i am wrong, i am sitting at my computer typing this review trying to name them in my head, but i believe it was broomsticks and the big apple yes it was but i am not sure if that is # 4 or 5 any way) when him and draco were in the library and he had to pick a girl and draco pointed to someone a lot like hermione and scorpius went for someone else... i think it is funny that he is now married to that type of girl.... but they have some heavy issues a drug addiction... oh and hermione is great in this as always and she is definitely taking more of a main role in this story.... poor draco thought she was cheating well it is good that they have such a close connection..... the wizard gauntlet is brilliant... and i can not believe that they are about to get caught oh how horrible... great job by the way
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2008
    Hey again jenny its mariah I love this new chapter its so cute and the sex scene AMAZING poor draco he so cares for jessie.how will blaise live in america? I love that you put luke and lily together they are so cute. If u are going to do another story in this series what will it be about? If not what will ur next story be? You are a amazing writer.
    Believe in the readers and they will show they love u.
    Update soon
    your humble reader
    Mariah
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  • From starrynite45 on July 30, 2008
    muahahahahaha! that's really hilarious! How they can explain that situation? lol may be they have to use truth potion or pensive to prove it! Persephone was really funny & a bit naive haha...i think that fertility potion must have something to do with her later! eh...but i wonder why they just couldn't appearate away from under there? well i'm a bit confuse why Draco had to clog open that -_-'

    okay keep updating...i have to go to bed, it's 3 am here now lol cya when i wake up to read more!
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  • From starrynite45 on July 30, 2008
    haha, that's ridiculous what Persephone confessed to Draco lol i like how everything between Drew & Luke went better than i thought. Such a big surprise to see Harry & Ginny and especially Ginny pregnant again lol now Draco knew about Gauntlet but i really wanna know how they can get out from that bastard...he planned to ruin reputation of him by using his daughter in law...can't believe Pansy would involve too coz in the third story she seemed to be good and didn't have any issue about blood anymore but i was wrong lol

    okay, enjoy the beach! waiting for ur next update :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2008
    Hey jenny its mariah again beautiful new chapter
    Scorpious is a pain potion junkie OH NOOO!!!! I feel for luna's little girl jesse.
    Omg poor draco and persephone captured and stuck in a dungeon. How will the family find out their gone.
    I can't believe draco had to listen to persephone saying that.
    Oh you nuaghty girl you.update soon. believe in the readers and they will show their love of your work.
    Bye
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  • From ANON - Apple on July 29, 2008
    I'm glad Persephone is standing up for herself and hopefully Scorpius will realize he's being an idiot and lose the potion. Based on his character though I'm gonna bet that Luke (or their parents) will have to make him see his stupidity. I'm glad Luke and Drew have sorted things out without things turning ugly. I'm eagerly waiting for the next update to see how the discussion about the Gauntlet goes.
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 29, 2008
    : O


    ..dun dun dun..

    Dude, so not a nice cliffhanger. I'm totally rooting for Lily, though, shes and Luke are just so much better together. And Scorpius and the potion, and being suck a jerk to Persephone? I just don't like it one bit. She ought to have slapped him 'cross the face. :| More more more please????
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  • From starrynite45 on July 29, 2008
    How Lily knew that Artie's not Luke's son? i now think i like Lily better than Drew like some people here too lol. Glad that they finally found the shell portkey to Bermuda too, haha.

    okay, i think all chapter now is great and keep going :)
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  • From starrynite45 on July 29, 2008
    lol what a mess! i guess Luke gonna know his mind so soon which witch he like now. anyway i still wonder how Drew will handle the truth she didn't even know.

    this chap really has so many things going on like teenagers dealing with emotion issue and such lol but next chap i hope to read more about Gauntlet! i couldn't believe Harry turned a shell into a portkey and Wood put it on the beach? uh...

    keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2008
    Hi its me again
    I love the new chapter its amazing
    Keep updating
    Will their be anymore stories to this series.believe in the readers and they will show they love u.
    Bye
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  • From bananasforyou on July 28, 2008
    wow sooo loved it!
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  • From ANON - Apple on July 28, 2008
    Drew's gone off the deep end! I really hope that Luke and Lilly get together they seem like a much better match to me. I hope Hermione doesn't get caught...how dumb is Oliver to put a shell portkey on the beach! This story is really addicting and I'm glad you updated twice today :D
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