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By : EventualDawn
  • From thrnbrooke on July 27, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 10!!!
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  • From serenagold on July 27, 2008
    =O_O=



    Haawwtttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From MilleniumForever on July 27, 2008
    *claps slowly* My, My, My. That is a rousing show, most deffinitly. I applaud the absolute power displayed in that wonderfully smutty scene.

    ~Sophie Max-Anderson
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  • From Jilliane on July 27, 2008
    (Chapter 9)


    That was....*whew!*.......hot!!!!


    *swoons*


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  • From Jilliane on July 26, 2008
    (Chapter 8)

    Aww....I'm glad Draco didn't reject Harry, and I liked his jealousy in the Great Hall, as well as Severus' support for their relationship and Harry's well being. I like it that he asks him questions to make him stop and think and to consider his actions.

    I do, however, feel sorry for Ron and Hermione. I do, also, understand Ron's current rage, but when it's all over and done with, and they've been told Harry said those things in keeping with a plan, that he is understanding of Harry's relationship with Draco. In other words, I hope Ron won't turn out to be the homophobic git he usually turns out to be.

    Another great chapter. I'm liking this story very much, and look forward to Chapter 9.

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  • From FallenAngel1129 on July 26, 2008
    dun dun dun....what will draco say?
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  • From Jilliane on July 26, 2008
    (Chapter 7)

    I'm interested to see Draco's reaction to Harry's declaration. Hopefully Draco will accept Harry's love and care and not reject it because he feels unworthy over what Voldemort forces him to do.

    Looking forward to Chapter 8!
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  • From ScottyToledo on July 26, 2008
    Very intense! Harry is going to really rip Voldy a new one I hope. And what about his friends? Will they forgive him when they find out he was acting? Knowing them, they will be angry that he didn't bring them in on it.
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  • From serenagold on July 25, 2008
    Aww... I loved Potter's brash descriptions of what he wanted out of Malfoy and how he felt. He's so blunt and uncouth, its fantastic!

    Keep up the great work. ^^

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  • From thrnbrooke on July 25, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 8!!! What does Draco say to that? How much of Harry's story is true?
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  • From Jilliane on July 25, 2008
    (Chapters 1-6)

    I've finally had a moment to start reading this story, and I have to say, I'm enjoying it as much as I am your other stories. I was a little leery at first about whether I was going to like it or not because it seemed like such an OOC thing for Harry to do, and I thought it was going to be another one of those Evil!Harry fics. What a pleasant surprise to find I was wrong. Harry is just undercover, not turned Death Eater-in-the-making. Yay!

    I like it that he's guilt-stricken at the things he says to Ron and Hermione, yet still strong enough to do them in order to stick to the plan. Severus has taught him well. I love the relationship Harry and Severus have forged, and I like it that Severus is still essentially Severus, but that we get a glimpse of the hidden side of him.

    Poor Draco. What a horrible trap to be caught in. Very much a damned if you do, damned if you don't situation. Having rape as a reward for service is a brilliant (not for Draco of course!) way of showing how truly twisted, evil, and full of himself Voldemort really is. What an awful psycological conundrum for Draco, do good and get raped, do badly and get killed. Awful too for Severus and Harry, having to accept the fact that rape is the lesser of two evils for Draco. Do or die indeed.

    I would if I may, like to make just one tiny suggestion. If you put the passages which represent Harry's thoughts/inner dialogue in italics, or bold italics (since you've put the dream/vision sequences in plain italics) it would differentiate from regular dialogue and be a little less confusing to the reader. Other than that, I think this is a great story, and I'm very much looking forward to each new update.


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  • From Toddy on July 25, 2008
    I like your idea about Snape as Santa Claus, it brings all kinds of amusing images to mind. However, I hope for the sake of the two lovebirds in your story that it never comes to pass. That is, unless you could wangle it as a reward for them at the end of the story.
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on July 25, 2008
    i wounder what draco will say...mmm....i think hes gonna jump harry lol
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  • From serenagold on July 25, 2008
    Great story. I like the fact that Harry switched sides to act as a spy, as opposed to some half cocked "oooo Harry's gone all evil and is now in Slytherin because Slytherin is evil ooOOOOoooo" story. God I hate those.




    Keep up the great work. This story is fantastic. ^^
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  • From EventualDawn on July 24, 2008
    Thank you, Sophia, I'm glad you are enjoying it. Honestly? I haven't got a set schedule of when I update, but this story has me so engrossed that there's every chance I will be updating every day. Even now I'm tempted to write the third chapter, and the first two were written earlier today. You can be guaranteed that it will, at the very least, be updated every week. However, as I said, it might be as many as twice a day.
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