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Reviews for Refuge Has Its Price

By : VictoriaPrince
  • From MaraudingLady on September 11, 2008
    Chapter 14 was excellant. I love how you wrote Hermione as such a survivor and so determined. I'm thrilled that you haven't turned Severus into a love spewing cream puff like some authors do. I think you've got him down pact with his quiet mysterious demeanor and that tenderness lying just beneath the surface. I'm really looking forward to reading how you make the relationship between these two unfold. So fare well and fantastic job well done.
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  • From Terrie on September 10, 2008
    I'm sorry but you need to explain to me why he felt the need to be so cruel and sadistic. He made her drink whiskey which made her cough with broken ribs??? Why?? He couldn't give her a pain potion instead? I thought he wanted her to eventually want him. This was not the way to begin that journey. He didn't act like that to Luna, Neville or Ginny. I am so ready to kick ass and take names later. There better be some severe groveling on the floor apology or some retribution for Hermione from him at some point.
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  • From Terrie on September 03, 2008
    Please accept my apology for not reviewing sooner. This is a fantastic story. I know that this will be a Snape/Hermione story (which is my fav pairing), but I'm really enjoying the "setting of the stage" so to speak. It gives a richer texture and a greater depth that is making your story so realistic. You have some unique and original ideas. Luna's character is great. Wonder of wonders you've even created a some dimension to Bella, not to mention Harry and little Tommy inside of Voldy's mind. So don't stop. I'd love to see an epic the size of "Gone With the Wind". This is shaping up to be a story that feels like a complete, complex world that I can get lost in and pretend I'm a part of. It will definitely be a "favorite" of mine.
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  • From purpledragon on September 03, 2008
    I love how your doing the story.Even though Rodophuls sure is one bad dude and I can't wait for Severus to get his hands on him and Grabbe!I can't wait for the next chapter and hope you can update soon!
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  • From purpledragon on September 03, 2008
    I have never thought of Lord Volemort as hot,but man was he ever hot!I felt like I was right there.So my answer is,,,,that was some great lemons!I hope you have Hermione and Severus next,hes my dream you know.
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  • From purpledragon on September 03, 2008
    That was a good chapter!I hope Luna makes it through everything o.k.Severus really does have a dark side.I like how Harry talked to Tommy.
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  • From MaraudingLady on September 02, 2008
    I really enjoy what you've written so far and I'm anticipating what will happen next. I'm glad that it looks like we'll be seeing more Hermione and Severus, but in truth I was liking the interludes with Luna and Voldemort. You made her in character, while showing her fear that any normal girl would have in the situation. Also, that was the first Voldemort lemon I have ever read and I enjoyed it immensely!
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  • From Citten on September 02, 2008
    well that was a great chapter now we can move on to some really good stuff. ;) like explanion-at least for hermiones benfit. and other moving forward progress. i wonder how ginny is doing and how things will go for lucius and severus moving on with some women in there lives. i cant wait for hermiones reaction to all this!!! :) do update soon!
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  • From DarqueHart on September 02, 2008
    Hello luv -- this is an experiment. You know I love the story, so I don't really have to write a review for you... do I? Anyhow, like I said, this is just me tinkering with the mechanisms to see what the buttons do.

    Oh, Complain to that nice Admin that when people leave reviews that it never shows what chapter they are writing about! That's just plain rude.

    DH
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  • From purpledragon on September 01, 2008
    of curse Luna would be scared who would'nt be?after all Volde does look like a snake!And lets not forget his mean ways.I always thought Luna and Harry should be given the chance to be togeather!But of course if I had my way Severus would still be alive and married to Hermione.
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  • From purpledragon on September 01, 2008
    This chapter made me want to cry!I loved every word of it though!
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  • From purpledragon on September 01, 2008
    That was a good chapter and what a twist having Harry in Voldemorts head.I hope the next chapter has more SS/Hg action though!Keeep up the good work.
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  • From purpledragon on August 31, 2008
    I just want to say that I love this story so far!Lately alot of the fan fics seem to be lacking the felling that thay actually believe that what there writing could actually happen.I don't get that felling with your story,it reminds me of some of the older great SS/HG fan fics(before we knew the sad fate of our loved ones).I like the Voldemort Luna twist to I would have never thought of that but it works.I guess as you can tell my favorite pairing is SS/HG. Got to love Severus!Thank you for the story us die hard SS/HG fans have all been waiting for it!
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  • From Citten on August 29, 2008
    i highly doubt any of you did anything 'wrong'. well i now am very interested in this elriwrith (?) power that luna has. :) i rather liked your take on how patriachal the wizarding world is. sometimes it is fun to make things so primal. :) okay so what is up next for all our 'lovers'? i did love the chapter. so update soon! :)
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  • From Apryl on August 28, 2008
    "creepy-crawly feelings", a rather accurate way of defining what it feels like to be a kid who has experienced adult sexuality. Despite feeling wrong one can't help but like it. Poor kid. I love your sense of humor- all sarcasm and wit. You mention Alan Rickman as helping the oppressed. I don't follow his personal life but I know he is involved with the NAS. Is this what you are referring to? You kinda gave me a clue by writing in Draco as autistic. This is the first fanfic I've read that mentions autism. Do you know someone on the spectrum?
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