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By : Rororin
  • From Hajime on August 14, 2008
    ooohh... rough sex under the full moon. niiiccee XD
    who'll be the antagonist in this story? i hope harry would open up to fenny..it seems fenny isn't really a heartless person in this story. he's more of a misunderstood person..
    update soon luv! XOXO
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  • From magentah on August 13, 2008
    I would never have guessed that English isn't your first language--congratulations. :D If you're still looking for a beta, or just for someone to double check for you until you do find a beta, feel free to shoot me an email: supertoks at gmail.com.
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  • From anniea on August 10, 2008
    ah i want more! please update soon *kisses*
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  • From ebilangel on August 10, 2008
    Yay!!! Another wolf!Harry and slash with fenrir too! Yum yum. You know.... this is aff, so you SHOULD write some smut between harry and fenrir XD. If you don't i'm gonna bite you >o
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  • From on August 07, 2008
    Your asking if you should skip the mating...are you nuts. Hack no, no skippy on the love making.
    Wonderfully written and addicting.
    I just absolutely love Fenrir & harry fics.
    I cant wait to read more.
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  • From Lina03 on August 06, 2008
    Good story! About your question, I think skipping it and going right to the day after will be better if you don't think you will be able to do a good job with the mating. Perhaps you can just have Harry remember/comment a bit about the experience instead. But really it's up to you. I mean, you do have to start somewhere right? So if you wish to give it a try, go for it, and should it be bad I am sure you will get some reviews telling you so, so you can at least work with that to write a better scene next time. Anyways, I hope you update again soon and good luck with the next chapter! ^_^
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  • From Lucifoy on August 03, 2008
    nice fic, i really like it, though this last chapter has some spelling mistakes, and it really needs more description, also Fenrir character is a lil ooc, too soft; and this chapters are too short!! i just want more, dont take long to update please!
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  • From LilCas on August 02, 2008
    Ok ok Ok so do there Mating i would so love it! Please Keep Harry And Finar(sorry if Spelled wrong) Alive and going!!!
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  • From Guderian on August 02, 2008
    Personally, I would much prefer to see your first attempt at such a scene. Even if it isn't perfect, it is practice. And you know what they say about practice.

    I have noticed several common spelling errors in your writing, most of which can be taken care of easily. For example, you refer to the full moon as the *fool* moon. Please understand that I am not being critical, I am instead giving you some helpful advice, writer to writer. I suggest that before you post a chapter as final, that you re-read said chapter to minimize the chance that spelling errors make it into the final product. I myself have done this many times, and it has helped me immeasureably.

    I wish you a good night.
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  • From Aalto on July 31, 2008
    you should definitely write about their mating. With lenght and much detail. Also about Harrys first reactions to his wolf side. It would be nice if he would realise he can get along with his wolf as long as he doesn't try to hide or subdue the wolf inside. Also wolwes mate for life, so keep that in mind when you write.
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  • From lonelyreverance on July 29, 2008
    be ambitious!
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  • From Hajime on July 29, 2008
    a fenny and harry pooh fic can't possibly be complete without the first mating luv! just go wild! let your imagination roam and NEVER be hurried! the best sex scene are made from at least three days worth of thinking. ;)
    just feel the moment and imagine yourself in harry and fenny's shoes. believe me it will come to you. gud luck on the mating luv;) its a-must so its not even a bloody question (wink)
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  • From alma on July 29, 2008
    Totally prefer the first option. Good chapter.
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  • From alma on July 29, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From lacquer on July 28, 2008
    I choose the first option! I like how your story is going, though yeah, the beta part would be nice too.
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