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Reviews for Twist of Lemon

By : HarryVik
  • From lacuselda on August 08, 2008
    Very lovely :) Please update soon, I really want to see what's going to happen!
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  • From SamHill on July 29, 2008
    In my honest opinion, yes, it has a lot of potential. However, I find it distracting when the story is "narrated" rather than told (or painted) and the "voice" talks to the reader. It takes away from the story itself.

    I.E. "I don
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  • From LydiasTravel on July 27, 2008
    I'd like to see where you take this, so I vote yes for a second chapter.
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  • From Madhater on July 26, 2008
    i find this to be very interesting i really encourage you to keep writing and i hope to see an update soon. ^_^
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on July 26, 2008
    Well, now that I started reading it, I want to see it through to the end. It has it's own personality to it. Please post some more.
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  • From yaoified on July 26, 2008
    i really thinkk thi needs more! lots more chapters! like a minimun of 10 or something! update now!!!
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