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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part III: Merlin's Tomb

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Jesse on August 04, 2008
    Too short!! That chapter was too short and I really really want to know what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on August 04, 2008
    Awesome, as per usual! As for not answering the reviews--though I must admit I love seeing my nickname in print, I understand completely. Take care and update when you can.
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  • From Utopia on August 04, 2008
    He he! She's like a kid in a sweet shop! And the poor little assistant wants to be anywhere but there! lol!

    Awwww... poor Claire's heart broken now! Someone give her a hug.

    I like her job description, though, I guess the myths are easier to get to in the magical world - they're not quite as mythical as the muggles think.

    Oh no! Stupid cursebreakers didn't check!

    Oh no! Oh no! She's hurt, and badly! OMG CPR?! S_G! Don't do this to me!

    Oh, Wizarding world hasn't got an NHS then? Bet this will be pricy.

    She'd better live, missus - you've 11+ more chapters to go!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on August 04, 2008
    another exciting chapter...i swear i want to go out onan archeological dig too!! do you think hermione would let me go in place of claire? i promise i won't drool over lucius...well, too much anyway....

    looking forward to chapter 10!!!

    Love
    Lady B
    xoxoxo

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  • From ANON - Jesse on August 02, 2008
    A little too short for my liking.. but your writing is as smooth as always. I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From Utopia on August 02, 2008
    What is Sev actually going through here? Is he throwing back anti-depressant potuions like the rest of us drink water? Oooh, I wonder what she whispered to him??

    Awww, at least she tried to help the walking dead.

    She's still in the blue! lol! I loved the description! Wow!

    sev's one of those blokes who goes mental for a woman doing the hoovering in nowt but a pair of stilettoes, isn't he? lol.

    If you look up 'bitch' in the dictionary, Molly's face would be printed next to it.

    Ha! Ron looking up Lu and Sev! OMG! I'm shocked they haven't backed into the wall! My Dad's an engineer, and the guys on his shop floor are 'sharing' an apprentice... they take the mick constantly, and the apprentice is too gullable for his own good... well, the fellas at work have convinced the apprentice my Daddy's Gay... apprentice doesn't know how to act! lol!

    I still want to see a HG/Sirius in your bunny hutch of 60+ plots! lol!
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  • From ANON - DaisyMaeEvans on August 02, 2008
    Thanks love! I think the way you did it was PERFECT.

    Major Hugs-
    -D
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  • From TheLadyMiya on August 02, 2008
    chapter 8
    Whi! New story up! I really like the begining of this story. I especially liked the chapter with Hermione and Narcissa! That was interesting and believable. Narcissa seem to be a woman who can be a real bitch. I'm not sure I would have thought Molly to be so mean, but JK hasn't written so much about her, all you really know is that she is very protective about her children :P But if she is a bit homofobic, I guess this could have happend... And it's your story, so you decied what the characters oppinions Ah, well, it made the plot interesting at least :P Hermione handled it very well!
    Tihi, I'm liking your promise about more smut :) I'm looking forward to the update!
    Take care!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on August 02, 2008
    awww, i want Sev and Lucius to take me out!! Or just take me...LOL. Well done, sweetie!! I am not a Ron fan but i like how you portrayed him in hti schapter! I am sure Lucius and Sev have increased their respect of Ron (but only by a smidge) because of his defense of Hermione. Waiting oh so impatiently for chapter 9....

    Love
    Lady B
    xoxoxo
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  • From KellyJCR on August 02, 2008
    You really, really redeemed Ron. I didn't think it was possible. You are killing me with Severus. But, you already know that. I have a soft spot for him it. I can't help but think that some sort of polyamorous relationship will occur. I know you have made it clear that Lucius will not likely share again and Hermione is a one wizard woman. Its just a feeling that I have that there is somehing more there. I could also be confusing a loving close friendship with a relationship that lovers share. Anyway well done!!
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on August 02, 2008
    Naughty Hermione. Teasing Lucius would be soooooo much fun. The ferret comment by Sev had me snorting my coffee, so funny.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on July 31, 2008
    Oh to be a little tart....Oh wait...I am one LMAO.

    I LOVED this chapter LOL, I would love to see that kiss again...*sighs*

    So Sev has BDSM tendancies does he? He always seems like he wants to submit to me LOL, well he does to his mistress =D

    A brilliant chapter my love!

    Vic x
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  • From chickaboo on July 31, 2008
    I love this story so much. The interactions between Severus, Lucius, and Hermione are done really well. Great update, I can't wait for more!
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 31, 2008

    Oh! Forgot! Here's a web site explaining bated breath. (Not baited, but it is such a common error that it will probably take over as correct usage soon. And then be even more weird and head-scratching.)

    http://www.worldwidewords.org/qa/qa-bai1.htm

    Hope it helps!
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 31, 2008
    Chapters 1-4: Hermione was lucky that Draco got her safely to Severus. Draco got an earful from Snape and it went right back to daddy. Thank goodness. It was so bittersweet how Snape took such good care of Hermione even after they were no longer lovers. Draco knowing just a bit about the threesome is funny, if a bit unnerving for the young man.

    Oh, that
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