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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part III: Merlin's Tomb

By : soldiersgirl0709

From ANON - mariteri on July 31, 2008
That was great! I was hoping you would bring Severus into this story. The three have such a great chemistry the way you write them. The sexual byplay (or is it bi-play? LOL!!) is so funny. Keep up the good work and update when you can.
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From KellyJCR on July 31, 2008
I am in hysterics that was the best conversation I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I still feel for Severus he is still clearly in love with Hermione. It seems (to me anyway) that they all did enjoy themselves the one time they were together. I also thought I picked up a bit of mixed signals from all of them concerning the gala and the threesome and if they were to repeat that performance. Anyway maybe I 'm reading into it to much(I tend to do that from time to time.). Well done I can't wait for more. Your stories are always a pleasure to read.
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From ANON - Mia on July 31, 2008
I have just discovered all this. I'm a newbie, I suppose. But of all the stories I've come across, thus far, your writing is far and away among the best. I devoured the other two parts of this tale, and am impatiently and hungrily awaiting each new addition to this. I love it. Your charm, and wittisisms, the adventure and thrill of it all just make for a very sexy and gratifying read. Thank you so very much for all the wonderful entertainment. I'm off to gorge myself on the rest of your works now. Thanks again,

~Mia
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From LadyBlueEyes on July 31, 2008
Brilliant as usual...I love the interaction between the three.....i smiled through the entire chapter....now, bring back my draco =)

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Love
Lady B
xoxoxo
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From helenesnape on July 31, 2008
Ah! Nothing is funnier in the morning than a pissing contest between two fine Slytherin men.

Hermione's suggestion of total submission in exchange for more hot snogging from Sevurus and Lucius sounded like an excellent idea to me. It just means more nakedness for all to enjoy. What's so wrong about that?

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update.
MHS
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From cnor9602 on July 31, 2008
My God, that was brilliant. I laughed out loud and here it is 1:30 in the morning. I had to stop half way through to put my kids back to bed when my laughter woke them up. I can just picture Draco with tears of mirth streaming down his face. I can't wait for more. Plus, if you are writing new Draco then I have something to look forward to.
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From Utopia on July 30, 2008
Oooh... seeing as he's a snake, does he have a forked tongue? lol! In one of Angela Knight's books there was a line referring to a dragon: 'once you've had forked, you never go back'. lol!

I don't think I'd be able to do that with my other half at breakfast! That lad can eat! I'd get whinged at for feeding him too slowly! lol!

OMG! Stop. The. Press! Lucius said Luv! Wow! He's got it baaaaaad. lol!

Is Hermione wearing knickers under that jimjam top? *giggle*

I'd have yelled at Draco for that! I thought she was a Dr. or Prof.? I had one teacher who hated it if people called him Mr. Brett - It was DR. BRETT, he'd worked binking hard for his PhD, and he was going to be called DOCTOR... it normally ended up as Mr-Dr-Brett when everyone kept forgetting the title! I had an image of Herms reprimanding Draco for getting the title wrong! lol!

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From LadyVoldemort87 on July 30, 2008
My lovely, beautiful amazing S_G! What a brilliant start to your outstanding series! I have to say the rocking of the carriage was brilliant LOL, totally how I imagined the scene would play out in my head. Lucius is as always, totally delicious. I totally wish I was Hermione, gods I'm so jealous!

Loved, loved loved Draco, what a hottie, Tsk, Amelia got it good didnt she?! LOL, I can't wait to read more!

Love, as always,

V x

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From ANON - Shetan on July 30, 2008
Another wonderful story
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From Kooldragon400 on July 30, 2008
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! SMUT!!!!

I have read all of your Adventurous Hearts stories, and I'm quite looking forward to this one. I love the lemons so far, and I still love the fact that she adn Severus are still friends. Even the bitter old dungeon bat (Albeit the SEXY dungeon bat) needs a friend... Can't wait for more...!
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From ANON - Angelbaby on July 30, 2008
Naughty Hermione. How much fun she must have had knowing the ex could hear them. She just has to punch Lucius now and she has smacked all of the Malfoy family. I like your fiesty Hermione, she's alot of fun. I so enjoy that when you start posting a story we get chapters neally every night, it helps to keep the story flowing because we don't have time to forget what we have read. Gorgeous and fun writing from you as usual, can't wait to get a look-see at those one shots.
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From ANON - Janeplay on July 30, 2008
That was so much fun! I really enjoyed Hermione whoopin' Narcissa's butt, and Narcissa's reactions to Lucius being free and involved with a muggle. I like your Draco too. It would be interesting to see a genuine JKR story about what happened to Draco at the end of the war to when he's on the platform for the Hogwarts' Express. But yours is an awesome story, awesome story...
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From Pumkin on July 30, 2008
so very glad your back writing. i have been waiting for this to continue. keep up the good work and update as soon as you can.
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From Terrie on July 30, 2008
That was so hot! I think my heart stopped. I know I stopped breathing for a minute. Great scene. However, Draco's just getting to laugh it up too much. Great series of stories. Thank you.
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From ANON - mariteri on July 29, 2008
Oh! Narcissa so had that punch coming! Nice. The new chapter is lovely. As for your comment on "baited breath", I looked it up on Google. It turns out that it isn't "bait", but "bate" meaning "slow breath". Get it? Good. Can you explain it to me now? LOL! Take care and update when you can!!!
P.S.--you are so correct about bait! Yuck!!
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