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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part III: Merlin's Tomb

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From thedarklordspet on July 29, 2008
    thank you finaly i loved it i cant wait to read more
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  • From HarryPotterFan on July 29, 2008
    Another great chapter in another great story. You amaze me!!!
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  • From on July 29, 2008
    I totally agree about Draco. It's got to be Tom Felton - he's too cute to be all bad! This chapter was too funny! I loved prissy Cissy!!! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Sheep on July 29, 2008
    That was an amazing chappie! I loved Hermione getting her own back on Narcissa, she deserved it "self important twat" lmao. Dracos reactions are so funny, his mix of amusement and disgust are great. I love your descriptions, you are a phenomanol writer :)
    My holiday was good thankyou, i went on an adventure type camp where we did surfing, kayaking, and coasteering. I managed to get seriously sunburned so i was glad to be back and have some time to relax even though it was lots of fun :)
    How is RL for you? i was sorry to hear about your RL problems i hope it gets better for you.

    -Sheep
    x
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  • From KellyJCR on July 29, 2008
    You know the smut made up for the waiting. I can't believe you had Hermione and Narcissa in a catfight and a good one at that. The term "catty bitch" is seldom used but it does describe some women to a "T". I love the fact that Hermione seems to have some unkwown control over Lucius. I know it is mostly lust and adoration but it always nice to see a slytherin be taken down just a bit. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of the conclusion. Thanks for the GREAT update I loved it.
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  • From Gertie on July 29, 2008
    Everyone loves a good catfight. Narcissa needs her scrawny ass beat! Hermoine's amplification spell was pure Slytherin genius.
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  • From helenesnape on July 29, 2008
    Whoo Hoo! Narcissa finally gets her comeuppance! I love it that Hermione's fist was 'connecting with Narcissa
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  • From carha on July 29, 2008
    Wow, you finally got it up. Figures, every time I cant get to a computer for a couple days, I come back to one of your stories. At least it makes the wait seem shorter :)
    Great story so far hun. Looking forward to seeing more. I kinda hope Draco ends up with that girl. She seems to suit him. And please dont forget Severus' happy ending too.
    Hope all is well in RL for ya. Looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Bookworm on July 29, 2008
    Love the fight between Narcisa and Hermione!
    Great chapter!

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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on July 29, 2008
    Yah part three! I loved loved loved it. Flirting with Lucius' girl was a very dangerous thing for Draco to do, luckly he was 'rewarded' for his match-making efforts, (burn the cushion - LOL). Poor randy Lucius couldn't even make it out of the parking lot. The story could end here at chapter five but luckly for us you love to empty all the stories out of your head and you'll add more chapters. Oh yeah and I so understand the dancing naked Slytherins in your head, Snape never seems to leave mine....happy writing.
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  • From ilke on July 29, 2008
    night after night as he lay in his bed and missed her. --- it's such a simple statement and I don't know - so powerful at the same time.
    LMAO - drop trou! Oh no you di'int! LOL!
    Oh, it's all so sweet and wonderful now. Why do I get the feeling it isn't going to stay that way?
    Such a wonderful beginning, or beginning of this phase. I can't wait to find out what happens!!
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  • From ilke on July 29, 2008
    oooh explosive Malfoys are so yummy! And I couldn't help but "awwww" at Draco and his father's date. Not a useful review I know, but I am really enjoying this!
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  • From ilke on July 29, 2008
    YIPPEEEE! I'm so excited for the new installment! What a great beginning! Yahooo!
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  • From eileenmilner on July 28, 2008
    What a brilliant start to the final part of the triad. I loved the fact you used Draco's Slytherin
    side to get Hermione and Lucius back together. A bit sad for Severus though.

    Lovely to be reading your story again. Best wishes, Donavon.
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  • From KellyJCR on July 28, 2008
    I have been waiting for the conclusion of this story the moment the last one ended. As usual you didn't disappoint. I must say I am feeling a bit sad for Severus though. It is clear he loves her and just wants her to be happy, even if it is he that suffers. The scene in the restaurant was priceless. I can just imagine a seething Lucius and a gloating Draco shooting glares from across the room. Can't wait for more. As usual very well done!
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