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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part III: Merlin's Tomb

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    aahhh a coddling lucius that is so cute but i can see where it can become annoying!!!! great chap although she did play dirty by throwing severus into the mix.... although that was some great smut!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    ha ha i love that hermione calls lucius' cane a pimp cane that is funny as hell..... i am glad harry came around i am sure that ron knocked some sense into him.... way to go draco that i think was one of my fave parts!!!!! lucius is a peacock an adorable and sexy as hell one but still a peacock.....
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    ok so they got the tomb open and of course hermione was excited to to get started wow she pushed lucius out of the way i think if he was thinking that would have happened differently.... i am glad severus has a clear head under pressure
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    wow great chap i was wondering if you would throw in a confrontation with the weasleys.... great chap... i lovethe protectiveness of severus and lucius.... and i love the beginning of hermione and lucius' relationship
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    oh wow what a lunch i was wondering how lucius and severus would respond to each other with this new change in their relationship.... severus and hermione are funny the way they share their food i imagine it will take lucius some getting used to i mean he only has narcissa for an example
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    omg that was the BEST chap.... i can not believe hermione punched narcissa that was great but she had it coming.... oh wow great job sg and i love that hermione just wanted to rub salt in the wound when she amplified her and lucius in the hall... i loved the beginning with draco i thought he was going to walk in on them that would have been funny i love his personality in this very sarcastic
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  • From smmz79 on January 22, 2009
    oh wow what a great chap... and yeahhhh shower time!!!! so draco has a play thing i wonder if one day it could become more she seems to be rather grounded!!!
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  • From smmz79 on January 21, 2009
    yeahhhhhhhh way to go lucius..... so they had the carriage rocking!!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on January 21, 2009
    wow nice job draco!!!!1 this is really a comical fic i love draco in this... i thought that you might not of placed him in this but this is you sg of course you would have draco in this... it is just not a complete fic without severus lucius and draco!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on January 21, 2009
    oh wow why do i have a bad feeling that hermione is going to stumble upon lucius with his 'date'.... ok so hermione now knows what is wrong with lucius while lucius is still lost
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  • From smmz79 on January 21, 2009
    nice i love that little quote at the end by severus... what a great chap i am glad that draco found her.... and hermione and severus' relationship is sooo sweet
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  • From ANON - savigar on December 16, 2008
    Up until now, I've mostly read Snape slash (and I still love it.) Then I found this story on Granger Enchanted, and it opened a whole new avenue of interest for me. Lucius and Hermione are so much fun to read, especially with a little Severus thrown in. I love your storytelling - just wanted to say 'thanks' for many enjoyable hours of reading.
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  • From TriniMinx on November 23, 2008
    Okay so while I like love everything I've ever read from you... I simply could not warm up to your trilogy. :o(
    I think it was def. a cute story, but your Hermione...ugh I couldn't stand her. I think that's what it was. I still want to whack her, or whack your Severus for making her so annoying, as he said in the 2nd one.

    :o/
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  • From on October 13, 2008
    Oh my, wonderful triology. Chapter 16...goodness gracious I was nearly sobbing for Severus. Very powerful words you put forth. Thanks again for writing such amazing fic! Simply Brilliant.
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  • From blondpierogi on August 24, 2008
    wonderful!!! brilliant!!! i loved this series!!!
    this was great to ready and i truelly enjoyed it. now i am sad that its over, but I can always reread it over and over!!
    once again BRILLIANT!!!
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