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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part III: Merlin's Tomb

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 20, 2008
    I loved this! Go Amelia, having a second go of our Draco!

    I loved the little tiff they had over the name LOL, it's so Hermione LOL

    This was a great chapter, I can't believe it's coming to a close already!

    Hugs!

    Vic x
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 20, 2008
    Chapter 17: And the bickering begins anew. Lucius has excellent technique in trying to guilt Hermione into using only his name, but he didn
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 20, 2008
    Chapter 16: Oh my, Severus in white. My imagination is failing me. He really does love Hermione to wear those clothes. His reluctance is pure Snape. Oddly, I
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 20, 2008
    Chapter 15: Hmm, so where DID the most powerful of magic folk go?

    It
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  • From ANON - Divanar on August 20, 2008
    Oh, the honeymoon!
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  • From Utopia on August 20, 2008
    For goodness sake! Still at it with the name argument? They've been married for a few hours and are already having a domestic.

    My Grandparents had an argument every day, 365 days a year. It was their key to a happy marriage. Worked for them too.

    He doesn't snarl? Oh aye, and I'm the Queen of Sheba!

    Breeze, blown... ugh, bad puns.

    Slytherins! They find a loophole in everything, don't they! So did he have his eyes shut while he did her from behind then?

    Duckie, check your pronouns: GOD DAMN IT!
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  • From jessirose85 on August 20, 2008
    That was a great smut filled chapter xxx more soon xxx i hope this doesn't finish soon cause im addicted to it xxxx i love your stories cause they are so detailed that you can actually picture them really happening xxxxxxxx 10/10
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  • From ANON - slytherin-princess on August 19, 2008
    That was beautiful *Sob, sniff* I always cry at weddings.


    Poor Sev!! *Sobs*
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  • From sweething10 on August 19, 2008
    Aww, you are breaking my heart with Severus. Please stop. LOL! I loved the conversation between he and Hermione though. Very sweet.

    What a beautiful wedding! So romantic.
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  • From CoCoM on August 18, 2008
    Beautiful!.....BUT poor Severus. It's like I am pleased that Lucius and Hermione ended up together, indeed I wouldn't be happy if it had ended any other way. In spite of that though, my heart breaks for Severus.
    As usual, your writing is superb!
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on August 18, 2008
    So sad for Sev!! I am really enjoying the conclusion, you've written it really well. Could they possibly get whisked away in another adventure for their honeymoon? ;)
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  • From ANON - Jesse on August 18, 2008
    You are so BAD!! I really truly have tears in my eyes. That song is so perfect for Severus and Hermione. I believe that Lucius is the right choice for Hermione, but I always do feel that there is a very deep connection between Hermione and Severus. You said Severus has a story coming up!?!? Can't wait. Oh, and a Draco/Hermione???!? Exciting!!!!! This was a beautiful set of stories. Hats off to you.
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  • From ANON - Shetan on August 18, 2008
    The Trilogy was absoulutely amazing, but the last chapter between Hermione/Lucius and Severus was special. I am glad that Severus will have his own story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2008
    I have always loved your stories. You are a fantastic writer, and I love this trilogy very much, I have followed it since the first day, but it has been very hard for me to continue reading this one because I can simpathize with Severus so much. I watched the man I have known since 6th grade marry another 3 years ago, and it broke my heart. Severus' feelings through this story just hit home. But I will always be there for him.
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  • From chickaboo on August 18, 2008
    Goodness that was so bittersweet there at the end. I must content myself with the knowledge that you have a story for Severus on the way though. But just so you know, it's still breaking my heart. Great update, I can't wait for more!
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