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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part III: Merlin's Tomb

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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 18, 2008
    They got married =D

    It was such a nice chapter, and a little bit of Sev in the mix aswell.

    Loved it!

    Hugs!

    Vic x
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  • From KellyJCR on August 18, 2008
    Alright you did it, that chapter brought tears to my eyes. I am NOT a emotional person but, that was just so very bittersweet. I do realise that Severus is right they would have made each other miserable. It is sad however to think of what could have been. I'm not so sure feelings like that ever go away they just sit in the dark corners of the mind. I'm sure you'll make it up to poor Severus. Well done.
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  • From kymmy on August 18, 2008
    Oh, so sad.... yet happy for Hermione and Lucius.... but still sad for Sev. I know you said he has his own story coming, but you have written him such that one feels so badly for him losing Hermione (at least as a lover and potential wife). Love your humor, Draco and his plan to liquor his new 'mummy' up and learn more 'secrets' and Sev tweeking Luc with the 'on the sly' comment. I look forward to the next chap, although I hate to see this end. As long as it was on-going, there was still this unreasonable (because I know you already said it would be HGLM and not LMHGSS) hope that both LM and SS would find their love in HG. Oh well, I guess we will have your next one to look forward to, a Dramione, huh?
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  • From Utopia on August 18, 2008
    Hat, check; confetti, check; tissues, check. Right, I'm ready.

    OMG! Snape? In White? Has Hell frozen over? (What did Hermione have to do to get him into that outfit? How much begging and pestering?). Awww... 'Do I have to?' He sounds like a kid who won't wash behind his ears! lol!

    She's barefoot... I'd expected the boots! The most recent wedding I went to, the bride barely lasted the photos before her pretty shoes were replaced by knee-high, lace up leather boots that sound a lot like the one's Sev bought her! lol! It took a lot of arguing to get Yolanda into a DRESS to walk down the isle! She stayed in it for about three hours before changing into jeans and a T-shirt! lol! Yo just doesn't do girly!

    I am going to cry - and it's all your fault! I always cry at weddings (or in the case of my cousin's wedding, I cried at the rehearsal the day before - we all did [when I say all, I mean the bride and three bridesmaids, which I was one of], but on the day we were all in fits of giggles as the vicar embarrassed us for sobbing the day before! lol!)

    I like that, they need something to make them compromise. Nice touch.

    They've been married all of thirty seconds and already that 'compromise' thing has to kick in! Why can't she have one name for the public and the other name for the rest of the time. Many professional women are still referred to by their maiden names once they're married; but the wedding certificate has them with their married name.

    Mummy. That's a strange image.

    That's it, pass me a hanky Hermione's confession to Sev has me sobbing!

    Where's my treat in this fic? I'll beg if I have to!
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  • From CoCoM on August 16, 2008
    Yah! I love our couple being in each other's good books, and of course having makeup sex, WAY better than all of the fighting and angsty-ness. It was so sweet that, in the end, they were both willing to give a bit for the other and it worked out perfectly. I am so pleased they are getting married as well! Are there going to be any more chapters for us to look forward to?
    P.S. I seriously think that someone needs to give poor Claire a makeover. I cringe everytime we read about her bottle-type glasses and crazy hair.
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  • From Utopia on August 16, 2008
    I think there will be a lot of people wanting to take Hermione's module at Hogwarts! It sounds great! Sort of a mixture of Classics, histroy and DADA!

    What about Claire and Snape together? Or is that a definate no no?

    Someone ship Claire off to specsavers for a set of rimless, ultrathin lenses, please?

    Well, that was actually unexpected! I didn't think he'd propose (yet)!

    OMG! Lucius has taken his head out of his arse! Wonders never cease! lol!

    I can imagine Lucius playing at being a house-husband; and running around an excavation after a tot with a bottle of suncream while Mummy digs for history! lol! She wears the pants in that relationship! lol!

    Which word was the vulgar one? Step Mother, perhaps? he he... oh, I feel so sorry for Draco! lol!

    Chastity boots! lol! (Was that for me? Is that my quirk of the fic?)

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! (and I said that to my laptop) he ASKED Sev for permission! I could kiss him! How sweet's that? AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

    beheading, dismemberment... I'd like Sev as a big brother too.

    I'm going to cry, it was so cute!
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 15, 2008
    Chapter 14: Oooh, Lucius is like a bull, bellowing and pawing the ground. Kinda cute. But the poor baby doesn
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 15, 2008
    Chapter 13: It always cracks me up when Lucius is so persinickety about foul language. With his past, a few nasty words should be the least of his worries.

    I hope their blow-up clears the air and lets them both understand their places in each other
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 15, 2008
    Chapter 12: OMG, Hermione really knows just how to push Lucius
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 15, 2008
    Chapter 11: Waking up to three ripe wizards could have been traumatic. A few scourgifies might have helped. And oops! Her pain medication is helping Draco form a new view of his dad. Severus and Luciu make a hot team bathing Hermione and caring for her in general. Are you sure there isn
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 15, 2008
    Chapter 10: Doing catch-up on reviewing. I
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 15, 2008
    This was a great chapter, I like how Sevvie tries to soothe her but it just makes her madder. My heart aches for him everytime I read about him in this tale. He needs a good woman in his life...Perhaps...A Goddess? Hehe....

    I really enjoyed this chapter and cannot wait for more!

    Hope you had a great day =D

    Hugs,

    Vic x
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  • From CoCoM on August 14, 2008
    I know, I know they are BF's but I was having to battle my frustration with Hermione there for a minute....I am very pleased that Hermione is starting to see things a bit from Lucius's (and Severus's) point of view. I guess that the other way to look at it is that Lucius and Hermione are too passionate (which is why we love them, hello!) to be able to reason with each other like Hermione and Severus do. I know this, I do. I just get a little bit hurt on behalf of Mr. Malfoy, that's all! :-)
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  • From thedarklordspet on August 14, 2008
    awsome i loveed it please could you write a draco hermione story next if your looking for ideas
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  • From on August 14, 2008
    LOL - Loved Lucius' temper tantrum! He can be such a spoiled brat! Of course, I understand his frustration, and I don't see him as a person who likes to compromise. Hhhmm, Hermione doesn't like to compromise either. Thank goodness for Sev. He's turned into a bit of a softie, huh?
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