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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part III: Merlin's Tomb

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From helenesnape on August 08, 2008
    Yea! Hermione's awake and being attended to by her lovely Slytherins. I knew you wouldn't let her die because necrophelia is just shudders UGH!

    As for Harry...damn it! Hermione should have made him grovel. But I guess that's just not in her nature, sometimes I think she is too Gryffindor for her own good.

    Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one (perhaps Lucius & Severus will take Hermione up on her drug induced suggestions. LOL) Can't wait!
    MHS
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on August 08, 2008
    YAY!! She woke up!! I adore her sense of humor, truly, i'd have to agree with draco, she is funny normally, but on drugs she was hilarious.... hmmm, it was obvious from part one that lucius was an arse man =) but draco too (I want more Draco!!) yummy, that man is walking temptation!!

    What witch wouldn't prefer the attention of two devoted wizards to see to her every need? Who needs nurses when you've got Sev and Lucius to take care of you.

    I knew she'd forgive Harry, he is an idiot, but thats something she has always known!

    Brilliant as usual!!!

    Love
    Lady B
    xoxoxo
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  • From Cliobella on August 07, 2008
    I love it! I'm a weapy blob now. I love the way you write the Slytherin Sex Gods. Thanks for redeaming Harry, by the way. He was such a little prat in the first two. Although, it wouldn't hurt to have Sev punch the little twit just once. ;)
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  • From CoCoM on August 06, 2008
    Hooray for the pimp cane! LOL!
    I am glad Harry has seen the error of his ways, although I wouldn't be rushing into forgiving him straight away. I do hope that Hermione wakes up soon and puts Lucius, Severus and Draco out of their misery.
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 06, 2008
    Chapter 9: So, was it the toxic gases buildup that killed Carnavon or was it really just an infected mosquito bite? The tomb was a magnificent find, but how awful that the loosening of the wards brought part of the tomb down on poor Hermione. Sometimes I wonder how she manages to get through her ventures when she
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 06, 2008
    Chapter 8: Oooh, sexy. Both wizards certainly clean up well. And so does Hermione. It will be a difficult labor of love for Lucius to accept Severus as Hermione
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 06, 2008
    Chapter 7: Truly, I don
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 06, 2008
    Chapter 6: It sounds like Draco has a very good technique of his own
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 06, 2008
    Chapter 5: [grin] Hermione never liked to fly. Finally it looks like Lucius and Hermione have found their way to each other
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  • From on August 06, 2008
    She better make Harry work for her friendship! I don't see Hermione forgiving him quickly anyway. I'm sure she'll wake up. I really want to know what's going to happen w/ Sev. Hermione & Lucius have made it pretty clear that they aren't interested in a threesome. I hope he won't be lonely & sad forever! More soon, please!
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  • From helenesnape on August 06, 2008
    I'm dying to know how Hermione's going to recover from this one...will she be the same Mione that we have come to know and love, or will she be a different person entirely? Can't wait to see how that will turn out.

    I am livid that Harry wants to make amends now. He has had YEARS to get over the ending of Hermione's relationship with Ron. Where does everyone get off making that their problem anyways?! Personally, I wanted to see Severus go all Death Eater on Harry. Harry most definitely does NOT deserve Hermione's forgiveness and it would be fitting to see Harry receive some physical pain in exchange for the emotional pain he has caused Hermione over the years. But, of course, Hermione being the Gryffindor she is will more than likely forgive Harry and stop Severus from beating him within an inch of his sorry life.

    There are so many things for you to work out in this story. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will make it all come together.

    Waiting (somewhat) patiently for your next update!
    MHS
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 06, 2008
    Oh so sad....Made me wanna cry...Infact I shed a few tears.

    Heartbreaking chapter, one of the best I've read so far and they are all fabulous!

    Can't wait for more!

    Vic x
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  • From CoCoM on August 06, 2008
    Awww, they are so cute...and hot! LOL. Oh to be in a giant, steamy, luxurious shower with a naked Lucius Malfoy...Yum
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  • From CoCoM on August 06, 2008
    The thought of Draco trying to cover for his father and Hermione while they get it on in a carriage is too much! That was a hot scene between the two of them. Anytime Lucius's hair being let down and/or tugged on is mentioned, I go into a hot flash. LOL
    I am also wondering if there is going to be a bit of something going on between Draco and Amelia now...
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  • From CoCoM on August 06, 2008
    *insert fangirl squeeee here* LOVE, Love, love jealous Lucius! When Hermione kissed Draco on the cheek and then he goes "Oh shit.." I laughed my butt off. What a great chapter.
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