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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part III: Merlin's Tomb

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From CoCoM on August 06, 2008
    The image of a pissed Hermione Granger was hilarious, especially when she started to tell Draco about the "kinky sex" between she and Lucius...and Severus! Oh, but only because they were high! LOL!
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  • From KellyJCR on August 06, 2008
    "She calls it your pimp cane." That had got to be the funniest thing I have ever read. I never thought that until now but, it is a perfect discription. I was surprised to see you go down the road of the "wounded" Hermione. It doesn't seem your way in most of your stories (although this isn't your average piece.). It was a great way to show the serious dedication The boys have for her. I'm also glad to see that you brought Harry around. The conversation he had with Hermione was spot on of someone who was repetant of their misdeeds to a friend. Sometimes the apologies don't seem real enough but this was not lacking. Great chapter and I can't wait for more.
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  • From Utopia on August 06, 2008
    Gallows isn't such a reassuring name for a healer.

    You think they'd have something more advanced breathing for her, looks like the modern ventilator is up there with stitches as an 'alternative therapy'.

    I've been thrown out of ICU too so the nurses could do their jobs. It hurts more than the patient not waking up because you're afraid you'll miss something! The word IF is so powerful when you're sat around someone's bed with machines doing everything their body had been doing days before... it really hurts to see that, and to hear IF rather than WHEN.

    Well, Harry grows a spine! wow.

    Pimp Lucius. lol.


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  • From LadyofClunn on August 06, 2008
    The heartache! If I wouldn
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  • From Larrabee on August 06, 2008
    BOOOO Harry! And Bitter Weasleys!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on August 06, 2008
    I had never thought of Lucius as a Pimp daddy before! Great chapter. Keep up the excellent work and update when you can.
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  • From ANON - Elle on August 06, 2008
    And I was so looking forward to Merlin actually being alive down there, some longstanding act of great magic. He wasn't killed, just endlessly trapped... I don't really know where I thought you'd go with it, but it was my gut prediction. Illogical though it seems now, what with the Tomb in such a state of disrepair. Unless of course that was a last ditch effort of warding of intruders...

    Nevermind, there's no reason to think he would be alive. I know Hermione will get better, and I know she'll wake up when she needs too, plot wise, I'm just interested in what this near death experience means... how it will alter your characters. Will Snape decide to fight for her? Unlikely, but traumatic events have a way of changing perspectives.

    Blah blah blah, love your story, hope you update soon. I have no expectations, and I make no demands, other than you provide me with chapters as quickly as you can. I trust you as an author, and that they'll be of quality.
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  • From cnor9602 on August 05, 2008
    Please Please Please let her wake up soon

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  • From LadyBlueEyes on August 05, 2008
    draco returns!! YAY..i missed him...i love hermione surrounded by slytherins, a part of me thinks she fits better with them anyway. Poor Severus he really needs an outlet for his anger....don't let him get a hold of the cursebreakers that didn't do their job well enough. a repentent harry? good...bastard deserves to beg her forgiveness...you are supposed to love your friends and support them, whether or not you agree with them. She'll forgive him though. She always has. A wonderful chapter...can't wait for the next!!!


    love
    Lady B
    xoxoxo
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  • From Larrabee on August 05, 2008
    Evil cliffie!!!

    *in shock*
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on August 05, 2008
    So many comments running through my head. Poor Claire, who is obviously blind as a bat to only see that they are together now. Poor Lucius, he had quite a scare but I know all your stories end well. Finally, poor Sev, not getting the girl again. Can't wait for your Sevvy story so he can get some happiness. Your doing well to work, be a Mum and to update your stories regulary. I love your comments back but would rather get another chapter to read.
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  • From jessirose85 on August 04, 2008
    Loved the chapter...drama alert xxx more soon please xxxx
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 04, 2008
    Oh. My. God.

    What the hell is going to happen now? Its one of those dum dum dummmmm moments!!

    Oh god, my heart is aching, and my back is aching too, think Luci will give me a good rub down? LOL

    Brilliant chapter, my love!

    Vic x
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  • From TheLadyMiya on August 04, 2008
    Oh! What an evil cliffhanger! But I don't think Hermione would die... that would just be... well... I have read some of you other fics and no one ever dies! So I don't think you'll have the heart to kill her in this story... And then the story will end and if I remeber correctly, you said that the second part of this serie was the shortest, so HA! She can't die.
    But there would be a lot of other complication... perhaps she looses her memory... or a limb... or the ability to walk... a lot could happen. I really hope she will be okay... I mean, hello, it seems like you can heal almost everything with magic ^^ I feel sorry for Lucius... it isn't fun to sit and wait when the one you love is dying... not fun at all...
    I hope we will find out what happens soon! Excellent chapter! Take care!
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on August 04, 2008
    Lovin' it! Great writing, and oh, i just can't figure out what to say except that I'm really enjoying it and i look for your updates first thing each morning and ...it's fabulous!
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