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Reviews for Young Girl - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - scary B on July 30, 2008
    Aw LaBib, I want more! Lol

    Of course I understand if you don
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  • From amyfeddy on July 30, 2008
    I have become quite a fan of you. It's too bad this was a oneshot, one more chapter would be like a cherry on top of a chocolate covered Lucius. I know you aren't going to give in to tantrums and whining, but maybe a little begging, or spanking (giving or receiving which ever you prefer). Just a suggestion.
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  • From CoCoM on July 29, 2008
    Please tell me you are considering a continuation of this!!...Please!
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  • From Clare1984 on July 28, 2008
    ooh you tease! Thought there might be just a squeeze of lemons between them but solo Lucius was yummy! Hermione was a little vixen wasn't she, knowing just what to say to entice him. How could he resist and what a birthday present for Hermione! So good!
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  • From ANON - Elle on July 28, 2008
    Blasted woman! Don't do oneshots! Your too good at weaving your words, readers don't want to settle for just a taste! Bah!

    Love ya, though. Please update Beyond the Veil Soon.
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  • From ANON - doodle on July 28, 2008
    Your work is always concise and well done. Your unexpected use of words and phrases is fantastic ie "A tent big enough for the Girl Gudies to use to camp" not an exact quote but it was perfect. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm on July 28, 2008
    As always.. Great work!!
    I love Hermione like that... Makes me wish I had the guts to just say to someone... I want you!
    But you can't leave us without the lemons!!!
    Please, please.. I realy want to kwon what hapens when he arrives at her place!!
    Anyway.. thanks for the great fic!


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  • From helenesnape on July 27, 2008
    Damn it! You stopped at the floo!?!?

    I loved the angst...Hermione's wantoness...Lucius' indecision. Made for a very enjoyable read (regardless of the lack of lemons :)) I really liked the wanking in the men's though...that took the edge off (for Lucius and myself LOL)

    Can we expect a follow-up?

    MHS
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  • From angelprince on July 27, 2008
    Lololol. Poor Lucius, he didn't stand a chance.

    When the Girl Guides are finnished with the tent, perhaps you, me and the rest of the girls can borrow it for next summer's adventures. Mmm hmm, I think so.

    Luv ya work Labib xx
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on July 27, 2008
    I loved it!!! Great song too! I adore the fact that he was having a toss in the men's, thats hilarious and I wish I were staring at him through a peephole...thanks for answering the challenge! I am loving all of the interesting music people are selecting.


    Happy Writing!
    SG
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on July 27, 2008
    aaaaaaarrrrgggghhhhhh ... hanging off the mantle, begging to step thru the Floo, too. Please, please, please?
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