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Reviews for Happiness Takes Courage

By : YourDarkestDesire
  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 05, 2008
    Hello....I love the premise of your story and I think that you write very well...just one thing....when did 29 become old? Im 33 with 3 kids but I dont feel old nor do I look aged slightly or otherwise! Sorry....that little bit got to me, but I like the story and hope you continue to update. =)

    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From ANON - shechosedown on November 05, 2008
    Hang on a minute. There is a discrepancy between Hermoine's actual age and your descriptions of her age. Phrases like "slightly aged" and "she had aged to a ripe twenty nine, but she had not lost her wit, or her charm, or the shy beauty that became her" make her sound ANCIENT. Do you really think that at twenty-nine we all lose our wit, charm, and beauty? That we are hags as soon as we approach thirty?? You were describing her as if she was in her sixties which is probably indicative of the fact that you are extremely young. I shudder to think how you would describe me (an old crone of thirty-two). Go on, glam Hermoine up a bit!
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  • From bananasforyou on November 05, 2008
    oh very hot and want more please!
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  • From kazfeist on November 05, 2008
    Glad to see this updated! I loved your description of Hermione's dress. Sounded so pretty. ;D
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  • From bananasforyou on October 26, 2008
    yes, i love it soo much!
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  • From bananasforyou on July 28, 2008
    more please!!!!
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  • From xsexxandxcandyx on July 28, 2008
    Pretty good start so far.
    Maybe try making the next chapter a bit longer ?
    Can't wait to read more.

    Much Love...
    XXX
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