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Reviews for Jealous Proposal

By : CodyMThomas
  • From bloodshound on June 07, 2012
    I'm glad you do your research. It irritates me when writers don't and just make stuff up off the top of their heads.
    wow, lots and lots of review fodder in that chappie. WB by the way and if that was an example to go by, i'm saying your muses are back on track and your mind is unblocked.

    So har isn't just BWL now but head of his own secret agency? That's awesome... not only is that awesome, but that's smart as well. I'm assuming dumbles doesn't have a clue or if he does, he has no idea of the scope?
    Also, the horcrux thing, is that an issue in this story? the Harry horcrux could really put a dint in things.
    heh, acme, i always thought they should have a practical use as well (one of my characters carries a few on her for getting out of restraints and storing things in. ^^)
    Windmill or rather WDML huh, that's very clever and also made me smile.
    So did the bodice ripper author who snuck real magic into her books (You GO girl!) I can soooo see har convincing Sev to try out a thing or three from those... and hopefully we'll get to read about it. >> ^^
    I still don't really get why har wants or needs the rough play, but hey, if he's happy, whatever floats his boat neh?
    I'm grateful the drought is (hopefully) over and look forward to the next chappie as this is one of the stories i keep an eye out for.
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  • From ANON - Madxhatter on February 23, 2012
    Damn good story! It's a great mix of saucy snarry, adorable tender moments great friendships and an incredibly intriguing plot.
    So thank you for giving us readers something good to sink our teeth into :)
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  • From Suziesu74 on January 27, 2012
    Just re read the last chapter....blew me away again. My new one for altered minds...in case you haven't read it...is up.but now looking at yours again it seems woefully inadequate :(..maybe it's because I have limited experience in the BDSM scene. Well enough of my moaning...bloody fantastic job. Almost makes me want to try it ;)
    Update as soon as that plot bunny bites!
    Let me know what you think about my attempt lol
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  • From Suziesu74 on January 14, 2012
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY by the way.
    Hope you had a good one!
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  • From Suziesu74 on January 14, 2012
    Wow...wow..wow...i need to lie down in a darkened room! ;) hot hot hot!
    I like the idea of the glove...i've only used peoples fingernails to score the skin before...mind if i use that in Altered Minds?

    Looking forward to next chappie (Dying to see how my new chap influenced you) :)
    Thanks for saving my lovely Luc.

    Suzie
    x
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on January 08, 2012
    P.S Happy Birthday

    P.P.S Remember, no matter the mess and what it is, Dobby will clean it all XD !!!!
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on January 08, 2012
    Ah, that was great ! In fact, how about we just skip the whole plot and you just write porn??? :D I can really tell that you have done many of the things you describe, very realistic scene...I was wondering if you could actually tell me if it is possible to come with a cock ring or a glans ring. I have always presumed that it was possible with the latter but not with an actual ring around your scrotum but another author on this site ( no names) regularily has her Harry cuming even though he is wearing a cock ring. Is that still possible? If yes is it also possible with a cock ring that goes around the scrotum and the cock? ( triple cock ring). Would this also be applicable for a "gates of hell" type cock ring?? Thanks so much, not planning on actually writing but just curious. Oh and I like to have my facts straight before I criticize 40 year old housewives making 'a go' at a BDSM story XD
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  • From ANON - Sharae on January 08, 2012
    Loving the story, pease continue. Good to hear that you've experienced what your putting Harry through, alot of people write it and have no idea what it actually feels like. That feeling of letting go and freedom is amazing and I'm glad others get to experience it. Keep up the hard work.
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  • From ANON - aloHola on January 08, 2012
    I'm speechless.
    honestly...I don't know what to right.
    That was SO hot
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  • From bloodshound on January 07, 2012
    I don't really understand the mind set that says it needs pain or physically uncomfortable marks to prove it's in a relationship with someone, but i guess Har has had a hard core life so why would his love life be any different. I don't get how pain can cause pleasure either, but whatever floats their boat, you know.
    I gotta say, i prefer the story line chappies to the smut but that's only because i hate waiting to find out what happens next and the smut chappies are like interludes... stuff I;d come back and read later once i got to the end of the story.
    Having said that, i do eagerly watch out for and await the next chappie of this fic.
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  • From ANON - AloHola on January 02, 2012
    Wow! Loved the fic. This is once of the few Ive read which actually feel real. Im oficialy once of your fans. I cant wat for the update and i think Ill start reading one of your Otero ator
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  • From ANON - sana on December 26, 2011
    huh, I wish my bf would spank me when he was riled up. I won't bored you with sordid details though and just suffice to say that I'm loving this fic. I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see if any of the Malfoys were caught and during the entire 'Princeton' scene I was absolutely speechless, I thought that was actually another bloke (even though it actually was that time lol) and I was absolutely stunned when Harry was treated so roughly and seemed to love it even though I was wondering what was going on with the stupid bonding ring the entire time; wasn't it supposed to stop that? But here I'm working myself into a tizzy over nothing, (though I would like to know what happened to that miserable excuse for a wizard creevy, whatever snape did to him he deserved it) so I'll hush and wait (not so) patiently for the next update.
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  • From djaddict on December 06, 2011
    Guh!

    Just love your Snape!!! Great characterization.

    I am a bit worried about the ring that Narcissa gave Draco however...

    Can't wait for more!!
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  • From WingsofaDream on November 28, 2011
    I've been a bad girl in not reviewing 'til now so I thought I'd take the time to procrastinate further on doing university essays to tell you that you're doing an awesome job ^^ I'm really picky about what I read and you've kept me both interested and not infuriated with poor writing. I really look forward to your next update and hope this review helps to keep the writer's block at bay :)
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  • From bloodshound on November 28, 2011
    Yay! my fave story updated again.
    Damn, Sev is GOOD, the way he plays them all is magnificent! Can't wait to see what he cooks up to get Luc out. Not to mention how he plays Moody and a certain sacrificial rat.
    As for Skitta :P.
    Luna is downright scary at times. Glad she likes Har. -_-'
    Is Snape going to drill Har on manners for the family announcement dinner?
    Nothin wrong with a little kink. (says the girl who owns a full length pvc jacket and bitch boots >>) In a bdsm sitch... the way i understand it, a flogging or a spanking is anything but punishment. :3
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