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Reviews for Slytherin Redemption

By : insane8veggies
  • From drariesfire88 on September 24, 2008
    i like the beginning it sounds good but like any story its just the beginning please add more

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  • From ANON - Saeadame on August 04, 2008
    Hi,

    I enjoyed your first chapter, and would be interested in being a beta for you. I don't have a bunch of experience, but I beta the fic Asylum (HP/SS) which is on this site. Let me know if you're interested!

    Saeadame
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 04, 2008
    sounds good so far. just a few tips, some explainations are need with sirius and the whole not in azkaban but even still its a promising first chapter
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  • From helewisetran on August 04, 2008
    more.....
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  • From feltonslover on August 02, 2008
    That is too funny, although I hope the penis exploding thing isn'y because of something the Durley's did to him. I like this story. Good plotline, Can't wait to see what happens next ;)
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  • From ANON - Solomon on August 01, 2008
    Very good one shot
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  • From helewisetran on August 01, 2008
    very good start, can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Trinity18 on August 01, 2008
    I like the idea but it makes for a confusing beginning. Obviously, the canon relationships both romantic and otherwise don't seem to match the original Harry Potter books so a little more concrete information about the roles that the characters play in each others lives would be appreciated. Like what is Sirius in this fic? No Azkaban so how is this timeline different? Those where just some of the questions that popped into my head. A bit more detail in the first chapter would probably serve you well. Besides that this is an interesting begining and hopeful there will be more to come.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 01, 2008
    Is Sirius still Harry's godfather in your fic, or is he simply Severus' lover?
    update
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  • From hqudsi0489 on August 01, 2008
    HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! god I was laughing so hard that I had to spit out my tea. I like it thus far. I was wondering though....are harry, hermione, & ron still gonna be friends or will it be only draco and the slytherins? I would think a mixture of both. how about the quartet....draco, harry, hermione, & ron? what ever u decide....i just hope its not gonna be like 50-100 chapters...that WAY to long. anyways, enjoying it thus far. btw, do u know any good stories in which harry is turned into a baby and someone (male) has to take care of them. "life from the start" is like on hold0or somthing.....??? dunno why....but yea cont this story...like it thus far.
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  • From alma on August 01, 2008
    Good start.
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  • From ANON - becky on July 31, 2008
    While you have a good idea going for you, the way in which you have written the story is not working. Rather than tell us something like the line

    "Severus had adopted the boy when he was 5 years old after his relatives had all been killed in a car accident. He hadn't wanted to but The Headmaster had thought it best. In time Severus' reluctance had been won over by the boys charm"

    why don't you show us through dialogue between characters? You really should consider a beta for this, not because its horrible but so you can develop the story with someone helping you and telling you what does and does not work. Keep at it and i'm sure you'll get better.
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  • From LexieAnnMalfoy on July 31, 2008
    I really like this story so far can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 31, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 2!!!
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  • From Jan on July 31, 2008
    Good start!!! ^_^

    Can't wait for chapter 3 to be posted :D

    Jan
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