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By : Lomonaaeren

From Dezra on December 01, 2008
When I first read the summary and read the first few chapters, I just wasn't sure if this story was my cup of tea. Wow, was I wrong. I so enjoyed this story just as much as all your other stories. Draco and Harry have seem to have made quite the journey in their relationship. Another fine job and am looking forward to seeing how you end it.
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From cravedom on December 01, 2008
I have enjoyed your story and in a perculiar way. I recently had an eye surgery that did not work out as hoped. That left me unable to read for a while. However my poor sainted husband decided that instead of killing me when I complanined of boredom that he should find a way to keep me quiet but alive. Aparently our somputer has a software that reads documents that I had not noticed before and; Ta Ta! I was able to enjoy your story.

The peculiar thing is that the reader sounds like a british robot. However you are so good at describing feelings that I did not need the inflection to know what was going on.

I am very intrigued by youor story and of course the identity of the psyco, er, impostor. The most moving character to me at the moment is Luciys because his pain runs deeper and how cruel to find out that your spouse never loved you and to even find yourself doubting your fatherly love. A decade of that agony seems intolerable and I hope he finds some peace. Severus is just cool, I cannot find it in me ot ever dislike him.

I appologize for any and all mistakes since I am unable to read what I am typping. I hope you are able to understand at least that I really like your story.
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From womo on November 29, 2008
woooooooo!! I've reached the updated of most updated chapters!

one comment: i find it funny how the object that makes Draco realize the truths about his obsession about Harry (thus allowing him to change/whatnot) is referred to by Draco as a blob.

a blob. lol. you'd think because he's so beauty-obsessed/strives to create an atmosphere of sophistication that it'd be called something more dignified than a blob. but it's funny.

anyway, i love everything happening so far. because the story is compelling. it's good. i like the plot and that that imposter is still on the loose even though it almost looked like he was about to reach an end. it will be interesting to see what happens with him next time. i enjoyed every single chapter- you are such a talented writer! i can't wait to see what happens next- both in terms of harry/draco's relationship and what'll happen with the imposter. great work!
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From callistianstar on November 29, 2008
I'm unsure if I disliked Narcissa's latest entry because of the mood Lucius was in or if I honestly disliked her allegations. I definitely felt sorry for Lucius and also worried and hopeful over where he'll take his revelations. He seemed upset, so I'm not sure what he'll do, but I'm glad he no longer seems himself as inferior to Narcissa.

Before it was different I think. Here, she stated that no one else could love Draco, which was sad in a way. I understand her feeling that no one else would protect him, as she had a husband who would give Draco up to the Dark Lord, and Draco didn't really have trustworthy friends, from a certain angle of viewing. It was quite shocking to hear of why she ended up dying, making Bella jealous. I suppose I had assumed it was greater, something even as direct as getting in the way of a blast or something. I think I remember Lucius thinking that she had gotten Bella upset, but I hadn't thought it was because she had tried to seduce the Dark Lord.

It was also sad to see Harry seeing Draco's actions as calculating with every movement even if he is probably correct. That is certainly what I worried over with most of this story, but now that Draco has bared his soul finally, it is quite a time for Harry to be suspicious. Although, this is a good course of action I think, but I wish Draco didn't see it as a quid pro quo deal. "Embarass" himself but for more sex.

I love your Skeeter articles, so I look forward to this interview/article. Wonderful job with this chapter. This is quite possibly the greatest story you written in regards to where my support is given, and where it is taken away as a reader. Very much a rollercoaster.
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From womo on November 28, 2008
ch 21: when faustine chuckles it's like she's chuckling with/for the audience. like "heh heh draco, you deserve this little bit of pain". lol.
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From womo on November 28, 2008
ch 19: oh ho. that last bit about wanting/not wanting to see each other was touching.
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From womo on November 28, 2008
ch 18: holy. crap. .......HOLY CRAP!!!!!

THAT CHAPTER WAS INCREDIBLY....good. wonderful. i loved it. draco, so stupid for trying to pull a stunt like that on harry....oh man. i can't wait to click 'next'.

but damn, that chapter was really really good.

at first with the betrayal, i was so saddened that parts of me got that ache-y feeling. but harry's letter to draco was so- wonderful.

can i worship you?

ok...on to the next chapter!
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From womo on November 28, 2008
i haven't been this compelled to keep on clicking 'next' for a harry potter story for almost a year!!! wow! i'm on chapter 12, but i just wanted to drop by and tell you how wonderful i think your writing and story telling narrations are. they are just sooooo good! i'm lovin' it.

i'm really enjoying this story. it's really exciting to read all the different things that happen. nothing feels or seems like it's filler. it's all very wonderful. great job!
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From womo on November 28, 2008
i haven't been this compelled to keep on clicking 'next' for a harry potter story for almost a year!!! wow! i'm on chapter 12, but i just wanted to drop by and tell you how wonderful i think your writing and story telling narrations are. they are just sooooo good! i'm lovin' it.

i'm really enjoying this story. it's really exciting to read all the different things that happen. nothing feels or seems like it's filler. it's all very wonderful. great job!
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From Toddy on November 26, 2008
Good! I can see a few more chapters yet. D & H have to grow together much more. I wonder if you plan any more miss-steps for their relationship?
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From callistianstar on November 25, 2008
^^ This chapter made me so happy. This was a wonderful chapter of reconciliation. Harry first got his apology from Draco's eyes, and then his words, and even if he did miss out with the "tone" of Draco's words, this was wonderful. Certainly, no one, not Ron, Hermione, or the public will understand how Draco was forgiven, but this was nicely done. Snape might though. ^^

As I really liked when you first introduced it, it was interesting and worrisome to see Harry have to accept Draco's confession about his obsession. Although in the end, I think Harry missed out that Draco was obsessed with him as a rival and how Harry was able to muddle through problems and trials, rather than so much about the "wealth and fame." To give some credit to Draco at least. While I felt sympathy for Draco, I really liked the line when Harry confesses that he didn't think of Draco apart from when Draco was "right in front of him."

Yes, Draco made a very good Griffindor in this chapter. ^^ Still looking forward to how you wrap up this imposter business. Awesome job with this chapter.
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From Toddy on November 24, 2008
I'm still hanging in there - So you haven't finished and the bloke's coming back for another go - great - more power to your arm.
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From callistianstar on November 20, 2008
I'm really glad Harry and Draco are back together again. Damn. I was glued to that scene when Harry encountered the imposter, screaming silent curses. While it wouldn't have been realistic or fun if Harry knew right away that it wasn't Draco, I really thought for a second that he [wouldn't die, of course] would get hurt because the imposter was able to trick him. Just curious, but do you plan on doing any scene in the imposter's view? Thanks for clarifying on Draco's plan by the way, although you also did that in this chapter. The imposter would have understood his obsession with Harry too then, wouldn't he? With that spell I mean. I really look forward to what happens with the Curse potion and the imposter. That Draco took the imposter out so simply and smartly was awesome. ^^ I liked when he rethought his position and planned like his character would, rather than just trying to figure out what Harry the hero would do. Wonderful job.
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From thrnbrooke on November 16, 2008
Soooo need chapter 27!!!
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From callistianstar on November 16, 2008
Well the plan won't work now, but I don't understand it. Saying the icantation twice...wouldn't he have been doing that anyways? My understanding was that the imposter wants to show Draco the icantation that will destroy him, and then use it. Either that or, was only going to say it once and Draco was going to ask him to say it again, but wouldn't that mean that the imposter wouldn't have "meant it" the first time? I hope this makes sense. I really love that Draco at the end forgot pretense and planning for the sole goal of not letting Harry get hurt. Although that very well may have been a stupid thing to do with the enemy being so smart. As for the spell, would it make the imposter become Draco, or would the imposter still be able to filter out the "imperfections?" Wonderful job. I REALLY look forward to this next chapter.
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