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By : Lomonaaeren

From ANON - Dezra on October 08, 2008
WAY TO GO, HARRY!!! Walk away with your head held high and make that shit chase after you.
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From FallenAngel1129 on October 04, 2008
you almost feel sorry for draco, but...he'll get over it :)
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From callistianstar on October 04, 2008
This makes me panic a bit. Mostly because I'm always on guard for Draco's unstable emotions and reading that Harry felt he was in love, was so Harry and, in effect, so very horrid. Draco's last bit does make me wonder if he finally understood his own downfall (should he betray harry) because they came together, and if he wouldn't have understood if he had retained "the upper hand". I am a bit scared that that "one solution" he has left isn't the romantic solution of just falling for Harry, and is rather something more drastic...not killing Harry (?) probably, but kidnapping him? I have a feeling that at some point Harry is going to see that "shrine". Kidnapping him would allow Draco alot of room if he went about it correctly seeing as he could complete his obsession's wishes. That would definitely be motive for a "time skip" Draco if that theory is still good (I'm not confidant in it much anymore).

Otherwise, yeah. I didn't think of that. Of course Harry wouldn't be thinking of anything but an "imposter" because he, himself, saw all the timeturners be destroyed. And it was Draco musing to himself, who thought of it. The twin thing, I didn't remember the time difference. But I assume that if this is just a "regular" imposter, that he didn't and wasn't able to just go through with his plan in a short amount of time. The twin would still have to get down those mannerisms afterall. So for now, other than the regular imposter, I'm still holding onto this theory. I suppose this chapter wouldn't have gone another way, as Harry's own ability to think was bogged down with the magical euphoria he was experiencing in Avalon, not to mention the presence of Draco. I really loved that line about "lowering of the eyelids", because maybe its just because I just finished watching "Primal Fear" but that psycho quality was quite amusing to me. And of course I'm enjoying this story. It is one of those stories that piss me off...in a good way. lol Truly driving me crazy. Wonderful job.
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From thrnbrooke on October 04, 2008
Sooo need chapter 18!! Oh Draco has me worried now? What is he planning to do?
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From ANON - MewMew2 on October 03, 2008
Excellent, simply wondrous. I love how you incorporated the sense that Avalon is not merely a physical place w/ magic infused in it, but is made of pure and ancient magic itself.Thank you so much for updating it so quickly.
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From ANON - MewMew2 on October 01, 2008
You did a marvelous job! I love how you wrote in the land of Avalon into your story. I'm a huge mythology and Aurthorian legends buff, so this was just the butter cream icing on your splendid cake. Bravo! Please update at your leisure once more.
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From thrnbrooke on September 30, 2008
Sooo need chapter 17!!! Avalon sounds heavenly!!!
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From ANON - Dena on September 30, 2008
First off, let me state that the writing for this story is wondeful. I have very much enjoyed all of your fics thus far. I especially loved Bloodied but Unbowed. This one I'm having a harder time with but that's because I don't particularly like these versions of the characters. That's the point. They are ALL so flawed. My buy-in to a story is the love of the character but these are so uncomfotable that I'm having a hard time with it. There is NOTHING remotely likable about Draco and Severus. I don't want to see Harry hurt but he needs to be in order for him to be free of his obssession. He needs to move on and he can't til this plays out. I LOVE happy endings but I'm not sure I want them together at the end. Draco doesn't deserve him and he does deserve to be miserable the rest of his whole pathetic life. He has learned nothing in all this time. He is still the vain, shallow child who blames everyone else for all that he perceives is wrong instead of admitting that HE's the only one responsible for his unhappiness. Not a comfortable story at all and a hard read but I suspect that's what you were looking for!
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From callistianstar on September 30, 2008
* Chapter 16 * Honestly only seconds before Lucius did his spell I began to oddly think back to Harry and his encounter with the imposter, and began to think it was weird that you constantly made Harry think of it as the imposter "getting Draco's mannerisms down" as if the imposter really wasn't Draco - some sort of clone, or timewarp otherwise. And now, you tease me with this idea of a twin! Honestly. That could definitely work though as far as our idea of old families (Man in the Iron Mask Anyone?) twins probably wouldn't be seen as needed, and I could definitely see where revenge would be wanted in that situation. Even more so since now that Narcissa is dead, whatever spell that might have been holding up this guy would have broke. Ultimately though, as this isn't the sense I receive from Narcissa's entries, I'm not sure about this theory, but as we get farther in chapters, I'm even less sure about timeskipping. The restaurant idea was a nice touch for Draco's sake who probably still burns a bit for not being invited to that other restaurant where Harry has correspondence. I like that Severus was faced with Harry's feelings on two important topics that he was most skeptical about. To be sure real quick: Avalon is what? Another island within Earth borne of magic? Another pocket dimension? Great job with this chapter. Thanks for the reassurances, although now I get to worry about something else entirely: the sanity of everyone's mind. Assuming Draco will get more twisted than this (he's improving this chapter though!) But the worry is keeping me in a good sort of tense mood about all of this. Lastly (I forgot almost) before continuing on with the story, I ended up rereading that sentence where Harry is thrown off a cliff a few times to absorb it properly. lol That was a well written scene.
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From ANON - fallenangel1129 on September 30, 2008
i loved draco throwing harrry off the cliff....heheh....cant wait to read the next chapter!!
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From Dadella on September 27, 2008
I had severe reservations over this story when I first saw it. I recognized your name, and thought I'd try it out because I loved your last one, and your one-shots are to-die-for, but it didn't work for me.

I tried again today and I stuck to it.
I'm incredibly glad I did; the progression is fantastic, their internal debate is well structured, I absolutely LOVE how intricately they each think something completely wrong about the other. Every thought is so detailed, it's perfect. I haven't found anything else quite like what you're proposing, and it's sort of inspiring something I've got in the works, but I felt kind of awkward doing that what with you doing it so well.

I can't wait to finish this story (though I know it's going to be a very long time)
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From ANON - MewMew2 on September 27, 2008
Excellent job. Please update once more when you find the time, I love imagining the scene of Ron and Lucius storming down the hallway together, simply hilarious and odd.
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From Mangacat on September 27, 2008
Mehehwwhwww... sorry, I'm a bit late, but I have a rather full schedule now and can't read all the time *sniff* anyways so Ron's here now to play nanny, well, get on with it!! And Lucius's plotting along... still don't get Snape, as for the plots, well, I think that one's a given!!
Cat
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From Jilliane on September 27, 2008
(Chapter 15)

I can't help feeling sorry for Lucius as he's reading Narcissa'a diaries. How betrayed must he feel? Regretful? Guilt-ridden? Misunderstood? How devastating to find the person you loved and thought loved you back never did.

I like Ron in this. He seems to know what he's about. I liked what he said about Harry's clearly unhealthy obsession with Draco. I liked how he was straightforward, without mincing words, with Lucius. Perhaps he already knows, or will come to see that Lucius isn't the mad one.

I have to say that Harry does seem a bit out of character here. I like that you have him acknowledging his own need to be taken care of in this. I know that Harry can be rather stubbornly single-minded about things, but while he seemed to previously have his doubts about Draco's trustworthiness, he now seems to trust him implicitly, and that just doesn't seem to make sense to me, particularly as an Auror. I suppose though, as his obsession with Draco grows, it clouds his better judgement, which I do understand. Hmmm.....sorry I can't express what I mean clearly.

And you've said Snape is off thinking about things in this chapter. Now you've got me all curious to know what he's thinking about. Hopefully we'll get a clue in the next chapter. Looking forward to it.
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From thrnbrooke on September 27, 2008
Sooo sooo need chapter 16!! Will Lucius and Ron find Harry and Draco? Will Draco give up his plans for revenge?
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