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Reviews for Damnation of Memory

By : moirasfate
  • From Riskybusiness on November 19, 2015
    Oh my goodness this story is insane. So well written and with such an intricate and well thought out storyline. I am super impressed and thoroughly enjoyed it all! Thanks for sharing :)
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  • From thebullygetsthegirlifheisjames on October 29, 2009
    A realistic ending, with Hermione presumably considered guilty the rest of her life. Good luck explaining the story to their kids years later. Hermione's reasons for not defending herself - revenge on her kids from the kids of those who died, amongst other reasons - were good.

    It is difficult to believe that the Knights would no longer be needed though. Avarice never dies. Neither does the supply of well-trained law enforcement officers who are happy to (like most of us) just take orders.

    Good choice making Ron the villain. I doubt he could be smart enough to plot, since he was born stupid, but hey...

    I did feel sorry for Percy though, so desperate for family approval...

    It was a pity Percy and Hermione never dated for long. Why was that, btw? It does seem Percy/Hermione is one of the most unexplored ships.

    More details on the Ministry politics would have been nice.

    When was Hermione's womb fixed? I thought it might have been when they entered Avalon, but she and Sev didn't shag after that, did they?

    I didn't see what Ginny was upset about Hermione's pregnancy instead of being happy. Then again, in the entire fic it seemed that Ginny only tolerated Hermione because of her connection with Harry (which I doubt she trusted as strictly platonic) and her guilt of her brother's post-miscarriage treatment of Hermione.

    It was also unclear why Hermione even dated Ron for more than a month in the first place, but too many fanfiction writers (Rowling included - I don't consider last two books anything more than fanfiction) fall into that trap. I wonder how this fic would have been if Harry had been set up in the role of former-boyfriend-who-tried-to-take-over-the-world. It would have been a harder fic to write since Harry has a brain (ok, he's not dumber than Ron) and more importantly, less naturally suspicious by the Ministry & public.
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  • From thebullygetsthegirlifheisjames on October 29, 2009
    I love this whole fic, but this was unquestionably my favourite line in it:

    “I remember Lily Potter as a insignificant face, James Potter’s plain wife…”
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  • From ann1982 on January 14, 2009
    I truly enjoyed your story, I found it refreshing and original. You need to seriously consider having it beta'd and post it on some of the HP specific sites. The readers of those sites often don't read unbeta'd stories and I am sure you would receive all kinds of love when they read this!
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  • From DarqueHart on September 06, 2008
    Spent the last few days reading your story and loving it. It is most excellent. There are a few typos running rampant throughout, but it did not distract from the imagination or the wonderfully told tale.
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  • From sbrande on September 03, 2008
    Oh how many hours of joy you have given me with this WONDERFUL tale.

    Loves you for it.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 03, 2008
    This was beyond brilliant, as your stories always are!
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  • From Persevero on September 02, 2008
    Fascinating so far. And 'enchiridion' - I love new words!
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  • From Poetlover on August 31, 2008
    Excellent story!! It made me laugh and cry. I'm a big fan of stories involving Severus and Hermione. Great job. I did see some grammer error, but mostly a he when it was supposed to be her or something of that sort. The ending does leave it open for a sequel, which I hope you consider writing. Once again excellent job. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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  • From nmos on August 29, 2008
    you're so creative.
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  • From KellyJCR on August 28, 2008
    I am just dying to read the about the entrance to Avalon. This has been such a great adventure so far and I can not wait for the rest. Your chapters are so well written and come up it seems everyday. Patienly waiting for the next chapter isn't easy but I try. Well done!!!!
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  • From AeroCherry on August 26, 2008
    I really really love this story so far. It is fast paced and very very well written. Please keep up the great work, I actually wake up for work early in the mornings so I can check to see if you have updated while I eat breakfast. Excellent work though, really top notch!
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  • From nmos on August 26, 2008
    you should have way more reviews for this story.
    i cannot wait to see what happens next
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  • From nmos on August 24, 2008
    sooo good.
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  • From noeby on August 23, 2008
    brilliant. yummy sex. looking forward to more.
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