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Reviews for True Friendship

By : MaKun
  • From absumoaevum on March 12, 2011
    Mind. Fuck.
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  • From treeson on February 17, 2010
    I think the main problem with this, and the HP/PP, is that the sex reads more like a porn than erotica. In porn, all you see are ACTIONS, and erotica is connected to emotions and feelings. To the context - the actual sex is not on the backburner, but it's definitely not the main focus.

    Here's a series of essays that will make more sense then me trying to explain it:
    http://trickster.org/res/howtowrite.html

    There's also this, which helped me immensely:
    http://cupidsbow.livejournal.com/194295.html

    Hope that helps some!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on August 06, 2008
    I just want to say that as much as I despise Harry/Ginny, this is very well written and I can feel the passion and longing from Harry for her. You almost make me a believer in the couple, which is better than what I can say for JKR. The Ron/Hermione passage was so kickass. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
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