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Reviews for Affliction

By : AimeeBass
  • From HermioneMalfoFan on August 30, 2008
    Sooo... I really like your story, although I personally don't see Hermione as somebody who would try to commit suicide because her husband cheated on her. I think she's too strong to let some bastard ruin her life like that. I think that there must be more behind that whole thing, maybe another, additional reason why she would be so desperate? But it is your story, so it's definitly your decision.

    Oh, and then there is one thing I realised: You wrote Fluer Delacour, but it's Fleur. I wasn't sure if it was simply a typos, obviously, but since you wrote it twice, I wanted to point it out.

    Please continue...
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  • From chickaboo on August 30, 2008
    Oooh. Great update! I can't wait for more!
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  • From blondpierogi on August 30, 2008
    HI!! I just read the 1st 6 chapters of your story, and it is BRILLIANT!!! I like it a lot and cannot wait to read more...
    soo many thing to find out the truth about?? ooh things are getting juicy!
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  • From smmz79 on August 29, 2008
    OMG i am utterly speechless... you threw me for a loop there.... and I LOVE IT!!!!! of course she can not be broken when her and draco start a relationship i do not think that would work out... but in this chap we saw mix of emotions for her that he would have never shown before which is starting his realization process.... wow why did blaise keep this secret but now it explains a lot and when draco saw something deeper between them i was thinking that he thought blaise loved her which is probably what he did think.... hmm i wonder how she will react when she finds out.... also i noticed that little part about fleur that should prove to be interesting also ron very true what made him sooo horrible i mean really the scene when he took her chair that was before he had affairs or after? ok and why was it that angelina was the only one outraged i mean ginny made a face but that was it.. also what is going on with her friends they seem to treat hermione as a doormat is there something more there? wow what a great chap i mean really there are so many questions that i am excited about learning the answer to that i do not even know where to begin... ohhhh what was blaise doing in america i mean really why did he have to do it alone bc if it was just some idiot contacting him threw the mark he would have told draco there has to be more to it then that...was it dolohov? ok i just want to say that you have done a great job at writing a broken hermione very believable but you have also given her a little spark to show us what she will be like when she gets her self grounded again... also i just love this type of blaise very caring and all that.... and draco is written very well all pissed off bc his best friend is upset then pissed off at his best friend very classic draco and well written... ok seriously i am not sure if i can wait as long for an update please update soon i am sooo excited to read dracos reaction....
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  • From bananasforyou on August 29, 2008
    shit, i think i fell down after that
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  • From ANON - Crittenz on August 16, 2008
    I like where the story is going so far. I saw a few spelling mistakes but other than that your story is just fine. I do hope you keep writing. Nothing bothers me more than Authors abandoning a good story. Then again having to wait a month for an update bothers me as well *Hint* *Hint*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2008
    I wana be an honorary Weasel!!! Aww I tell ya, I almost laughed at loud when I read that seen. You got Draco's attitude spot on! **wipes tear of laughter** Really tickled me. Im also so glad to see that you have a NICE Blaise! I do love the potential of his character and even like Hermione/Blaise fics (of which there are not enough!) I ended up making my version of him a sadistic evil bastard but this Blaise is the total contrast! Awww I wana hug him.

    I also wanted to say go you girl! Was so good to hear your comment about your other fic, stating that you felt it was good! I find that even myself among them that so many authors are nervous and reluctant to hear back that their story is good that they forget they wrote it more for themselves. I think its fantabulous that you think your fics fab! And I can tell you that I certainly agree!

    Will be following this until the end ^_^
    V xxx
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on August 15, 2008
    i like this story hope u update soon
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  • From smmz79 on August 15, 2008
    what a great chap... i can not wait to see what hermione does to ron i hope she gets him good!!!!!
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on August 15, 2008
    I dont like Hr/R either lol. You did good though
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2008
    Simply bloody marvellous ^_^
    V xxx
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  • From faerieflightz on August 14, 2008
    I like it. I can't say I love it yet but I'm going to keep reading and hoping for an update soon. It is very well written and I hope to see more soon.
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  • From chickaboo on August 10, 2008
    You're right. It was a fairly short chapter. BUT...it was a good one. I can't wait for more!
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  • From dominique1 on August 10, 2008
    i likeis story i hope that mia makes ro pay
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  • From smmz79 on August 10, 2008
    wow blaise and draco at the burrow this should be good... i wonder why none of the weasleys are there for hermione... hmmm and when will ron find out about hermione, i hope blaise is no thte one to tell him ron may not make it out of that conversation or maybe i do want blaise to tell him.... so this ignatio sounds interesting i wonder if he will make a repeat appearance, he just sounds like someone that has more of his story to tell..... well i am looking forward to reading more please update!!!!!
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