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Reviews for Affliction

By : AimeeBass
  • From distinctlyME on August 10, 2008
    It's good. It is starting to lack the emotion it had in the first two or three chapters. But it's good. I don't think anyone is going to start hating it anytime soon.

    Just a note, you might want to look into getting a Beta. I noticed a few mistakes. It's up to you of course though. Just making a suggestion.

    keep up the good work.
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  • From smmz79 on August 10, 2008
    wooo great chap.. ok so that answers the question as to why draco was in her house.... so blaise and hermione are best friends that is interesting... i wonder how that happened.... and where in the hell is she at...
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  • From chickaboo on August 09, 2008
    I love this. What she was feeling in the first chapter was described perfectly. I've felt it before myself, but I won't go into too much detail other than to say that you captured the emotion and the physical reaction perfectly. Of course I didn't go for suicide but I definitely can relate to the feelings of utter despair and shock. I can't wait for more and I hope you update again soon!
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  • From distinctlyME on August 09, 2008
    God, there is so much emotion in your chapters. It's entrancing.

    I'm really curious as to why Draco was in her house. And why there was a flash of green. Does't green mean Avada Kedavra? anyways, I can't wait to be entranced more by your chapters.
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  • From amyfeddy on August 09, 2008
    I like the story so far,but make the chapters a little longer.
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  • From starrynite45 on August 09, 2008
    interesting chap! i don't know about aspirin+alcohol but it must not be very very good lol it's a good chap though it's depressed ...but i like it...wanna read more!
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  • From smmz79 on August 09, 2008
    nice chap... i can not believe that she slept with ron but of course she would she was hurting... wow so what was draco doing in her home and why did he come at that moment???? hmmm and i hope ron gets what he deserves in the end!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on August 08, 2008
    WOW what a great chap.... I can not wait to read how draco falls into this... great job
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  • From Kristen on August 07, 2008
    i love it! please update soon.
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  • From kazfeist on August 07, 2008
    A very good first chapter. You have captured perfectly what I see as Hermione's basic insecurity about herself in any area outside academics. I think it's a fairly universal feeling among girls with a different kind of beauty. And, the opposite feeling occurs in girls who are physically attractive. They feel they cannot sustain a relationship once their looks begin to fade. Can't wait to see what's next. :D
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  • From rubyr on August 07, 2008
    wow that was great start. very dramatic. keep it coming
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  • From lijekongval on August 07, 2008
    this is good shit:D really good writing, the way you describe hermiones breakdown is just fantastic!! keep up the great work
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  • From distinctlyME on August 07, 2008
    wow. just wow. it was intense and sad and vulnerable.

    I always love how Lavender is the dirty mistress. It never ceases to amuse me.

    You definitely have me in for the long haul. I'm truely interested to see how this will play out. How Draco comes into the equation should be interested.

    I wasn't too thrilled with the ending. I would have expected her to leave, or make him leave. But I know that deep down if I were in her shoes, I would have done the same thing. I would have lain with him, needed the comfort even if it had been coming from his arms, so even though I wasn't thrilled about it, I understood it.

    I think I'm not thrilled because I know I would have done the same, and that makes me feel pathetic. and I don't think Hermione should be pathetic. But I know she'll gain her footing again. I was proud of the hitting though. Not that I condone violence. But yes. He deserved it ahhaha.

    Eagerly awaiting your next installment.
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  • From bananasforyou on August 07, 2008
    oh wow!
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