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By : radiofishlips
  • From on August 27, 2008
    Oh another great chapter, I would like it if you could email me, as I would like to talk to you more about your story, as I would like some help for my story, as I like what I'm, reading so far and I would your advise for on this subject of Dom/Sub. In my story Harry and Hermione (there will be a few others) are in a willing Dom/Sub relationship, where Harry will treat them fairly and caring, but with the other slaves he won't be. So I need help with the willing Dom/Sub part of the relationship for Harry and Hermione. Some of your ideas I'm planing to use soon, but I would like help to make sure I'm doing things write... so could you email me ASAP - ranger_daregn@hotmail.co.uk

    I like how Harry has been treat Hermione so far and I can't wait to see what happens next, and see how people well react to the relationship.
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  • From on August 27, 2008
    Not a bad start mate, I like the talk between Harry and Hermione at the start where she told Harry that she wanted to be a slave, to be controlled and force her to do thing she wouldn't normally do, but only if that person loved her. I hope you don't mind but I might use some of your ideas for my story Harry Potter and the Slaves, as Hermione in my story wants to be submitted by Harry, and I need ideas.
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  • From Sepiroth189 on August 27, 2008
    awesome chapter. will you make it so that the dream was real. It would be interesting to see Haryy and Hermione use Hermione and her father to their whims
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  • From fableblade on August 17, 2008
    I really like what is going on here, Luna on the chase lounge playing with herself came as a very nice surprise. Keep up the good work.
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  • From fableblade on August 13, 2008
    Glad to see you getting the Chapters up fast but don't rush them at the cost of a really good story.


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  • From flatliner15 on August 13, 2008
    you could branch out with some ron/ginny incest now that they don't have anyone, would be hot and you could put some submission in there too
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  • From Araea Swiftwind on August 13, 2008
    I am very interested in this story. The plotline is really good. You have a number of spelling errors and grammatical errors, but all can be easily fixed if that is your desire. The errors in punctuation do affect the flow of the story and make reading it a bit difficult, but after a few chapters, it gets easier to overlook those errors, though that is not to say that they really shouldn't be fixed. I do enjoy this story, and it has given me a different way of looking at things in regards to het HP stories.

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  • From pfeil on August 11, 2008
    Uhoh. Please leave Luna out of this. (Or at least make sure she's with someone else or not poo!Luna.)

    Glad you're not planning on whoring her out, and greatly enjoying the little games he's playing with her =)
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  • From darklordrevan on August 11, 2008
    hot damn
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  • From lycus on August 11, 2008
    That was an excellent chapter , And I would like to thank you for not turning Harry into an asshole. Lots of stories have Harrys personality change drastically in this type of situation, But I really hope that Harry isn't some one who will share Hermione, with any other guy, another girl maybe.
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  • From pettrum on August 11, 2008
    Ooooh, I hope Luna joins in! She can be such a wonderful sub, or switch :-)
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  • From 94caddy on August 11, 2008
    Very exciting stuff and I cant wait to see Harry use Hermione.
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  • From ecorate on August 09, 2008
    love the story so far keep it up. Update Soon
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  • From angelnomiko on August 09, 2008
    wow that was great ..please please update soon .later for now

    angel
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  • From fableblade on August 09, 2008
    I like the way the story is going and can't wait for more, I hope the detail into what goes on in the story stays just as good or even better.
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