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Reviews for A different way of looking at things

By : radiofishlips
  • From oldwolf on August 08, 2008
    An excellent story. A good deal of setup, but oddly enough, all the better for it. The descriptions are both detailed and sensual.

    My only real suggestion is to get a good beta-reader. There are several consistent word usage mistakes which detract from the smooth reading of this story.

    Aside from that, excellent story and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From jessirose85 on August 08, 2008
    Have you thought on who you will get to join them....i think it should be a Slytherin xxxxx
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  • From ninjamonkey26 on August 08, 2008
    I reeeeeeallly dig h/hr love/sex slave stories so u def have my attention sir. One thing that has been nagging me tho is the constant exclamation points. Surely Harry/whomever is talking isn't raising their voice every other sentence?....
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  • From DemonReader on August 07, 2008
    Interesting I would like to see more... plz update when you get more written
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  • From pfeil on August 07, 2008
    None of the books mentioned safe words?
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  • From pfeil on August 07, 2008
    Hope Harry quickly gets his act together to be what she needs.

    Though I suppose getting there slowly could be a fun ride too =)
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  • From Uthra on August 07, 2008
    Good preparing chapter. I liked the conversation at the end.

    I am glad you made this not just into a game for Hermione, not just a bedroom-slave, so that hopefully we'll not only see the 'sex' side of things, but also their interactions and reactions from the outside. Like the teachers or maybe even her parents...

    Looking forward for MOAR either way.

    oh, eh, is this story or your writing in general discussed anywhere? Because this review system is not the best there is... or how would you like to get future inspiration / motivation?
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  • From on August 07, 2008
    ok getting chills.....good ones with goose bumps
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  • From Bigfunk89 on August 07, 2008
    Loved this story concept please update soon!!! If you need a beta let me know my email is www.diagon@gmail.com

    Cheers
    LP
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  • From Uthra on August 07, 2008
    Nice

    I am looking forward to read MOAR !

    And am curious if Harry will be up to take responsibility of Hermiones's life and decisions in public.

    How long do you plan to make this story btw?
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