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Reviews for At the Shore of The Heart

By : neelix
  • From catysmom1028 on August 28, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From helenesnape on August 28, 2008
    Augh! That infuriating man! The fact that he wouldn't even respond to her letters irritates me...he's a typical man I suppose. Well, at least Severus is going back to Hogwarts. Perhaps he can find some semblance of normalcy there. He spent a long time with Lucy, practically as a Muggle. It would stand to reason that he should get back to his magical roots, so to speak.

    Edward is also an idiot. What was he expecting when he saw Hermione again? That she would just fall back into his bed and everything would be as it was before? Perhaps a change of employment is in order. Maybe if Hermione wouldn't be inundated with Edward's presence everyday, she would have a shot at closure-from Edward and Severus.

    Thanks for the double update! Looking forward to the next chapter(s)!
    MHS
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  • From noeby on August 28, 2008
    hi hon,
    a nice set of chapters. a bit of both pov's. Being in love changes someone and it's normal she would have wanted to contact him if he shagged her and ran away!!!

    Great stuff. Iwas looking forward to these a lot, and as usual, they dont disappoint.
    N
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  • From KellyJCR on August 28, 2008
    I knew he'd be like this. I don't know what minor miracle you have up your sleve to get these two back together, they seem almost emotionaly impaired. Severus has always been so extreme or "severe" if you will and Hermione is just an open book ( pun not intended). I think our heroine needs to toughin up a little. She doesn't seem very OOC due to the circumstances and I think any woman in her situation would feel the same. It seems all of this is due to the fact that Sev hasn't let go at all and he needs to if he is going to lead any kind of happy existance. Not that he should forget Lucy but make some peace with her death. I did read some where that it takes a full 2 years for the grief process to complete itself. I truly believe it can not be measured everyone is different and just because the grieving is complete it does not mean that the living are somehow magically ready to let go. As usual can't wait for more and Well done!!!!!
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  • From jddammann on August 28, 2008
    Pain, on both parts, fix it... :-) Actually, loving the story, but get them together if you can! :-)
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  • From helenesnape on August 26, 2008
    Augh! Sometimes Severus can be such an idiot! How could he just leave like that? Yes I realize that he is still devastated over the loss of his wife, but did he really need to add to the confusion of the situation by sleeping with Hermione and then running off like a kid caught out after curfew?

    I know...she sort of asked for it (I
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  • From jddammann on August 26, 2008
    Lemons good!!!!!!!!!!!

    The end scares me a little, but I know it is what has to happen. They will work through this, and so will we.

    Amazing and always good writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2008
    i really like this story..i hope you post more soon,,cant wait to read more..i think there is more to lucy then severious thought, maybe a little magical. and boy are they in trouble,,they didnt use protection...oops..hehe...cant wait to read more. very well written.good job.
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  • From on August 26, 2008
    My goodness that was intense. Well done. Thanks for the updates!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on August 25, 2008
    NICE!!!!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 25, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From jddammann on August 25, 2008
    I'm so glad he left his date and came back to Hermione, so yes, you are right on track! :-) Although I do like angst, I have to admit that having enough of it in my own life these days leaves me with less fondness for it in stories. I love the story and will keep with it no matter what comes!!! :-)

    Thanks for sharing!!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on August 25, 2008
    Ugh...Im glad he didnt go in with Ines LOL I nearly stopped reading the story because of her. Dont ask me why, I dont know...I get weird about Snape with OCs.....Im an odd bird at times. Anyhoo....very heart wrenching, it will take some convincing for Hermione to beleive his feelings for her are real and not just him being on the "rebound" so to speak. Should be a rough road ahead for them


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From Carine on August 25, 2008
    Hi neelix,
    this chapter was just so sensible,I think it was a good idea to have kept the lemons back.
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  • From KellyJCR on August 25, 2008
    I'm confused why could he not shag Ines and then in the next breath he is kissing Hermione. Is it because he didn't feel comfortabe with Ines or, is it the fact that maybe becasue Lucy liked Hermione it was Sevs way of thinking she was a better choice. This story has my heart going to highs and lows so rapidly that it may cause bodily harm.. Can't wait for the next installmant I am totally stunned at the latest turn of events. Well done!!!
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