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Reviews for At the Shore of The Heart

By : neelix
  • From scarletbandit on August 25, 2008
    Oh my god, just finished reading your latest update, it has me on the edge of my seat! I cant believe the cliff hangers your keep leaving your loyal readers lol, i'm new to the site but youf fanfics are ace! Cnt wait until its finished, i knew you wouldnt be so cruel to leave Herione on her own while Severus dated. Keep up the great and inspiring writing!
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  • From sectumsempra on August 25, 2008
    I am loving this story. At first I was devestated that Severus was so hung up on another woman, but now I see thats how it had to be! lol, Love your work :) keep it up!
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  • From Tenar10r on August 25, 2008
    Very much on track :)
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  • From emerson on August 23, 2008
    I like the use of the character Ines. We can't have Hermione taking on the role of rebound/physical release girl. Thanks for the update!
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 23, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From KellyJCR on August 23, 2008
    I was not ready for that. This story is killing me. Since when has Hermione sat idley by and not give any kind of insight to what her opinion is. Although I do see her point it is painful to watch all the same. I don't want to like Ines and I am slightly pissed at Severus, but we have to give him some slack due to circumstances and what not. I am bitting my nails as I wait for the next chapter.. Well done!!
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  • From noeby on August 23, 2008
    eeeeeeeeeeek Ines???

    lovely chapter. I felt like I was on hols on the med.

    scrummy.

    thanks love!
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  • From on August 23, 2008
    Lovely descriptions. I got a good feel. Thanks for the update.
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 22, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From KellyJCR on August 22, 2008
    It wasn't as bad as you might have thought. There was enough content to show where Severus is in his grieving process. I thought the description of the villa was lovely. I am oh so curious of what is going to happen now that Ines has pointed out to Herione that there are feelings other than frienship for Severus. Well done can't wait for more.
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  • From noeby on August 22, 2008
    I liked that one. And intro'ing a new character who might even push things along, yes? LOL

    thanks!
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  • From neelix on August 21, 2008
    Hey Noeby

    Sorry to hear your sad news - sent you a PM on 394.

    nee x
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  • From noeby on August 21, 2008
    oh you meanie, stopping there.

    my dad died today. this cheered me up. Thanks. N
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  • From CB13 on August 19, 2008
    I knew Edward was a shallow jackass from the moment I met him.

    Ok, ok, that's bitter, and wrong, and I know he's a "red shirt" - your screen name indicates you know what I mean here - but still, really, his poisonous little letter to Our Heroine left me seething.

    Good work!!!

    CB
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  • From jddammann on August 19, 2008
    I am loving this story, and you were right it took several tissues to get through the last chapter. I am hoping for them to get together, but of course we, and they, will have to get through this painful time. If you can shorten that time it would save me on the cost of tissues. :-) Really, your talent for writing is extarordinary and I look forward to more!
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