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Reviews for At the Shore of The Heart

By : neelix
  • From noeby on August 19, 2008
    ah, nice. Sad but good. Thank you for writing more!
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  • From KellyJCR on August 19, 2008
    Every time I stop you have me tearing up again. Great chapter it really let us in on how Sev is getting on. It was also nice to see that Minerva still has an intrest even if he isn't responding. It lets him know that he isn't alone although Sev almost seems to revel insuffering in exile. Beautiful and sad at the same time. Well done!
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  • From noeby on August 19, 2008
    too short, neelix!!! LOL

    Seriously, though, what a piece of work Edward is! How rude. Maybe it's good that he's gone now and she sees what he's like.

    cant wait for more.
    N
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  • From KellyJCR on August 19, 2008
    Well it seems Edward is not very understanding. Apparently buisness is buisness with him. If he knew Hermione at all he would know that she wears her heart on her sleave and eventually a patient would reach her on an emotional level. I would dare day she is well ride of his company. Severus is still in a bad place I'm know loosing someone that close is difficult to move on from. It takes time and a few months is just not long enough. I am sure he will come around at some point (at least that is what I hope). Til next time well done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2008
    i love this story. update soon.

    Foofie
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  • From noeby on August 18, 2008
    neelix,
    I'm grieving at the moment. There is no pattern to it, and each person has their way. While you could have written chapters on snape's grieving, it wouldnt necessarily add to the story. This is 5 months later. I think you did the right thing. We know how much loss he felt. And how he treated hermione was very in character. N
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  • From CB13 on August 17, 2008
    Good job, getting through the grieving as you did. I don't mean to trivialize it, and I know that you don't, either, but heavens, if you just wrote about grieving it wouldn't be a story appropriate for the present audience, would it?

    Lovely take on the pairing - I'm really enjoying it.

    Cheers

    CB
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  • From Angie30 on August 17, 2008
    Wow neelix that was something else. I hope Severus tries and makes it up to Hermione. And no you didn't gloss over Severus's grief. We all grieve in different ways.
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  • From Carine on August 17, 2008
    Hi neelix,
    sorry,but it has been a long time since I last reviewed one of your stories.RL is kicking in and my children both have two whole months of vacation and we have to battle for the pc.Besides I got lost on GE for a while.Today my oldest daughter left for England and she asked me what she could bring me from her trip;I asked her to go,find Alan Rickman,stunn him and bring him home,but I guess that she will have other iteresting things to do. That reminded me of your bio and I needed to check out your newest stories.And I wasn't disapponted.This story is soooooo good but also very sad.I think I will be back again tommorow to check if tere is a new chapter.(((H))) Sureves Epans
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  • From on August 17, 2008
    Well done. Hermione leaving...omg, ouch. Thanks for the update.
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  • From KellyJCR on August 17, 2008
    You are killing me. I think you have captured Sevs grief perfectly. I find it interesting that he has slipped back into his old brooding self so easily. He seemed quite differnt almost changed when he was with his wife. Hermione however is seeming to loose her gryffindor bravery. She has always been one to meet her problems head on and this Edward individual doesn't seem to be good for her. Great update, I can't get enough of your story. Well done!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 16, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From CB13 on August 16, 2008
    Liked your author's note; especially liked how the lines you used were Rickman's from S&S.

    I'm enjoying this story, despite the currently sad (yet all too common, here in the Muggle world) storyline.

    Cheers

    CB
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  • From on August 16, 2008
    Oh my, so sad. *sniffs* Beautifully done. Thanks.
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  • From noeby on August 15, 2008
    that was beautifully written, neelix. Just lovely.
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