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Reviews for At the Shore of The Heart

By : neelix
  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2008
    omg that is so sad. i lost my dad not that long ago so i know what severus is going through. you feel so lost, (well i did), i had such a huge hole in me (thats what it felt like). i sat beside his bed as he took his last breath, and i am glad i did, it gave me the sence that it wes real.

    Foofie
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  • From MomoDesu on August 15, 2008
    I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to see more.
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  • From on August 13, 2008
    I do enjoy your stories. I look forward to reading more as you have time. Thanks.
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 13, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From angelnomiko on August 13, 2008
    wow that was great .. please please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From auntbecky on August 13, 2008
    Oh heck,who cares what you're in the mood for. A good tear-jerker never hurt anyone. Good start.
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  • From helenesnape on August 13, 2008
    Aw! Snape really is in love with his wife. It's sad that it will end so tragically though. God (or whatever diety controls destiny) certainly doesn't like to cut Snape a break.

    I liked that you explained a little more about how he came to know his wife and what he's been doing for the past few years.

    I can't wait to see where you will take this next.
    MHS
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  • From noeby on August 13, 2008
    I like it so far. Sorry if you're not in a cheery mood, though.
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  • From KraeHi on August 13, 2008
    OMG how could you, you little tease, I thought you were going to kill severus. Naughty for decieving us like that... Cant wait for more!

    Anya
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  • From Angie30 on August 13, 2008
    Such a heartbreaking story neelix. Poor Severus.
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  • From helenesnape on August 12, 2008
    Oh my! What a gut-wrenching way to start off your story. Hermione is a healer in the most emotionally draining ward (Hospice) and she has to console and comfort the most disagreeable man on the planet (Severus Snape). Can her life get any more complicated than that?

    I can't wait to see what direction you're going to take with this. Looking forward to your next update!
    MHS
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  • From noeby on August 12, 2008
    oh, hell, Neelix! What are you thinking! LOL This will be a long one. SS married with a woman he loves (although dying). HG involved. I've got my cuppa. Just waiting on the updates.

    Noe
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  • From KellyJCR on August 12, 2008
    Wow, glad your back. I am deffinatly interested in your story. this one seems very different from those that you usually write. I've don't know how you are going to work this out. They are both in seperate relationships and Severus is going to be morning when his wife dies (unless she gets magically saved). Can't wait for more. Well done!!
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