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Reviews for At the Shore of The Heart

By : neelix
  • From missanimegrl on May 02, 2010
    I've finished the story and I loved it. Especially the end. Lol, Freddy can see the other Lucy, eh? ^.^ And she's happy for them. I'm glad. A sad but sweet and beautiful tale.
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  • From missanimegrl on May 02, 2010
    I'm reading this fic by you and so far, I love it. I'll review again when I finish, but I had to tell you, I envisioned (and I wonder if you meant us to) Lucy looking like Kate Winslet. She and Rickman are my favorite on-screen couple (even if they were so for one film, I feel they work beautifully). I wish you'd written about how he and Lucy met and got together! But still, I do enjoy your takes on SS/HG. ^.^
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  • From stopperindeath28 on September 05, 2008
    I LOVED THIS STORY!I THINK YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER I ENJOYED ALL OF YOUR STORIES.
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  • From on August 30, 2008
    Lovely and romantic. Thanks.
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  • From rageinsilence on August 30, 2008
    I have read all of your stories and they are some of my favorites. You are right alongside Subversa, Azazello and Ramos as my favorite fan fiction writers. I can't wait for your next story.
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  • From ellaevenstar on August 30, 2008

    Hello!
    First of all, thanks for reading and reviewing my story =D It was very nice of you.
    Secondly, I want to say I absolutely At the Shore of the Heart. I actually only started and finished reading it today. It was so heart-rending.
    I just adore stories like these. I like your Snape a lot, he's gentled down in a lot of ways, though still remaining the Severus we all know and love.
    Your writing is excellent and I can't wait to see more stories from you
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  • From noeby on August 30, 2008
    you know I really DID love the story. Don't take my comments to mean other, please! But I was enjoying it so much I was interested to see what might come along. But hey, I take your point about getting lost in the middle. And some fics are REALLY long.

    This is I think one of my favs of yours.

    I hope RL eases up. As you say, thank god for fanfic to escape the X!@Z that goes on.

    I really appreciate all your writing.

    Thanks
    N
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  • From neelix on August 29, 2008
    hi Noeby,

    You know, I do enjoy writing the epilogues, and while i love writing the fics in themselves, I tend to get lost when i try and string it out too much!!! So... my feeling is, lets cut the 'will they, wont they,' cos we know they will -


    I did mean for this to go on for longer but to be honest there is so much going on for me RL right now... complex...

    thank god for fan fic - it keeps me sane!
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  • From noeby on August 29, 2008
    wow, finished already? I thought this one would be much longer. Nice that they had that conversation -- ah, before the lemons this time!

    And the epilogue was really sweet. I like that they had that closure with Lucy. Because he feels so deeply, it makes sense that he might still have that twinge of guilt. Love how you did that.

    And I think I've figured it out: you love getting to the end, don't you! LOL

    I do too, but I also like the journey. It would have been interesting to see what you'd have done with a few more 'developing' chapters in the middle.

    Don't take that to mean I didn't like it; I did!
    N
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  • From Angie30 on August 29, 2008
    Excellent story neelix, I've enjoyed reading it from start to finish. I loved how Severus got her to finally listen to him and what a hot lemony scene.
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  • From neelix on August 29, 2008
    Thanks for the heads up about the chapters... I had real problems posting.

    I have also been trying to join the forum since I started writing and it never lets me - anyone any ideas where I'm going wrong?
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  • From helenesnape on August 29, 2008
    Yea! They're back together (and in such a hot and demanding way!) Thanks!

    Also, don't know if you've noticed it or not, but your most recent chapter 'With Consummate Skill' was posted three times. Not that I was put out by getting to read it three times (it was quite enjoyable!) I guess AFF is giving everyone trouble with their story updates.

    I can hardly wait for the finale of this great story!
    MHS
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 29, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From KellyJCR on August 29, 2008
    Its not so predictable. I think Severus has some serious groveling to do if he is going to get back into Hermiones good graces again. Usually it would be Hermione having to convince Sev to give into what the heart wants. However a well written Severus and Hermione is always a wonderful thing. Sorry to see it coming to a happy close so soon but, looking forward to the next update all the same. Well done!!!!!
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  • From on August 29, 2008
    Oh poor Hermione. She's trying. Snape is one stubborn dude. Thanks for the updates!
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