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Reviews for Pains and Contradictions

By : padme82
  • From morningstorm70 on December 08, 2016

    Not fair you made me choke up with tears at the end there on this chapter 

    So far I'm loving it


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  • From Annecia89 on March 17, 2015
    This story was so painful and sweet! I loved it!
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  • From NonServium on May 31, 2014
    Oooh... I just read chapter 10. I need tissues. That was probably the first funeral scene I have ever read that made me cry. Oh my god that was so sad. -blows nose- ;-;Welp. TIME TO READ THE REST!
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  • From ANON - burningnebula on August 19, 2013
    I'm at chapter 10 and this story is absolutely captivating. It becomes difficult for me to read sometimes because it reminds me strongly of when my best friend died. The emotions you describe ring true, the guilt and the way you have moments that you forget they're gone and then it all crashes back in. Even besides that it's a really good story so far and I look forward to finishing it.
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  • From ANON - Amy on November 29, 2012
    This is one of the best fanfics I've read, and I've been reading them a looong time! It made me laugh, it made me cry, it made me scared, it made me happy. There was a point near the end where I didn't want to click 'next chapter' because I'd become so involved in this story and the characters that I didn't want to know what happened next incase it was bad! While smut is great, it's even better when it compliments a great story as it did here. So much thought and planning went into every scene and it totally paid off. Thank you for writing this story, the last two days I spent reading it have been an emotional rollercoaster!

    Oh and one more thing, normally I don't mind angst as it never seems that bad, but in this story? Wow! Just broke my heart haha.
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  • From Butterfly1993 on October 11, 2012
    Brilllllllllllllant !!!!! Had me crying a couple of times mind u ive got a cold n feel right sorry for myself so im crying at everthing lmao xD wonderfully written XD
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  • From LadyFreak on June 29, 2012
    lovely lovely story! Not predictable like a lot of stories today and a very enjoyable read. Nice balance between lemons and the story line. Gosh you had me crying something fierce and often too, but this was amazing. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Artistand on June 24, 2012
    This is one of the best stories I have read. Great job! Good plot, characters that started out as they had originally written and grew throughout the story. I laughed and cried and would love to see where Harry and Severus go and what they do on their sabbatical. I can just imagine them at a rollercoaster. Do, please, continue to write these characters in short stories or oneshots.
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  • From NinaSweets on April 23, 2012
    Wow. What a beautifully written story, I don't think I've ever cried so much. It was just amazing. I don't normally like so much sadness and angst I'm more of a comedy person but sometimes a girl just needs a good sad love story with a happy ending. So, so beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Minwerina on March 25, 2012
    Hi!

    I just wanted to say that your story is incredible and I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed it earlier. I believe I found this here when you had posted something like three chapters, and from then on I would pop in here three or four times a week (sometimes daily) to check whether you had posted more or not. And now that you have finished the story long time ago, I still come here to read it again and again, like today.

    I'm not much of a writer or a critic, so I can't simply find the words to descripe how awesome your Pains and Contradictions is. I have completely fallen in love the way you write and especially portray the characters. My whole time favourite character in HP is Snape, and I simply adore your skill in writing him in such a realistic way in this setting. And Harry. What is there to say? It was heart breaking to read about him loosing Ron, then warming to see how Severus got him under his wing to make his suffering at least a bit more bearable, only to see him break his heart because of the git. I also enjoyed reading about the moments between Harry and Remus. I think you have done great job with the werewolf, too. I simply loved the interactions between him and Severus. Oh yes, Albus too. That wicked old man...

    I believe reading every chapter the first, then the second and the thirt time (I think I lost count as to how many times I have read your work) left me speechless every time. You have such a talent in your hands, and I salute you for it. And thank you for giving me all these feelings and making my life a bit more special.

    Now I'm off to enjoy your work yet again.
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  • From BellixiesPixies on March 24, 2012
    omg...this might be my top favorite of all times...i think it really is...
    it was truly magnificent.
    thank you
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  • From Nihilism on January 25, 2012
    Your story made me cry. Maybe I am not in my right mind (must be true), but everything in your story rang so true, so beautifully tragic... I really love what you made of the characters, their thoughts, feelings, beings were so well-described I couldn't help but reading the full story in less than a week (and I still have to go to college every day). So really, your story is a real masterpiece in fanfiction!
    Take care of you,
    N.
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  • From YaoiBatman on January 25, 2012
    Finally, I have finished reading! I absolutely love this and I have just finished recing it.

    I didn't really like the Fate personalities, but they where not a main focus so it didn't really bother me that much, however, I loved the subtlety of their presents like the voice that tells Harry to shake Draco's hand. Those moments were perfect.

    And the friendship between Remus and Severus is wonderful, the development and results are sweet and funny. Possibly the best friendship I have ever read for those two.

    As for Harry and Severus, I'm so glad they could have a happy ending. I've never cried or raged as hard as I did for this fiction. I love the guilt Severus feels for binding Harry to him and I love the wake up call he receive (and I do believe that it would have taken a life or death experience for Severus to see what he was doing was not to Harry's benefit). But their happy ever after it was got me the most. I do believe that Severus scooping out the raisins from Harry's oatmeal was an extremely touching moment that told me that they were going to be okay and that they had a future.

    Thank you for writing such a lovely story.
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  • From MidnightKat on November 07, 2011
    Beautiful Story. Wonderfully written. Thank you!! Kat
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  • From ANON - O on September 27, 2011
    You are just amazing, I love people who write Snape the way you did, strong, proud, and secretly always trying to find is redemption. This is by far one of my favorite Snarry's I so think you and Tire Nog should write together, my goodnes the result would probably leave me unable to speak.

    Thank you!
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