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Reviews for Pains and Contradictions

By : padme82
  • From NobbyPotter on September 13, 2009
    Severus, you bastard! I hope you come back alive. If you die, I hope Ron kills you in the afterlife then brings you back to life, then sends you back to Harry so he can kill you himself. Harry's passionnate speech worked partly since they kissed but it was not enough to make him stay. As Remus said, damn you, Severus.

    The dream was kind of sad. Ron is waiting for Harry, like he knows something. Severus, Harry is dying because of your staying away, damn it!

    Fate intervened once with the potion, why don't they do it again? Severus needs a good kick in the butt!
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  • From ANON - Iralima on September 13, 2009
    Thank you! I've been checking 3-4 times a week for an update =) Such a relief to know you'll be continuing the story. And a great update it was too, I really do hope Severus doesn't die though. It was just too painful reading about Harry begging to think that it may have been for nothing... Looking forward to the rest of it!
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  • From starstruck86 on September 13, 2009
    Oh god, that was a wonderfully powerful chapter -you certainly came back with a bang.

    Like Remus, my heart is aching. *sniff*
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  • From ANON - purpleredswirls on September 07, 2009
    I enjoy the emotional depth that each character feels so they are no longer stereotypical fan fiction characters that are not in control by the author. Many times the characters are not given enough depth and just appear as names doing actions and going through a plot. CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!...no pressure cause as a previous fan fic author I know how that feels...lol
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  • From stargirl77 on September 04, 2009
    Are you ever going to update this again? I really really like this story and have been waiting to read more. Please?
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  • From ANON - Sheree on August 16, 2009
    Please add my address to your update announcements - I can't wait to find out how it ends.
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  • From greenwizard11 on August 15, 2009
    I just finished chapter 22. I really liked this story in the beginning. While I'm not a big fan of character deaths, it was a creative way to get them together.

    But I think your chapters are kinda long... I know some people like long chapters, but when it takes an hour to get through just one I don't always have time for that. Also, lately you've been dragging things out. Like the last three chapters, you've been going back and forth saying basically the same thing over and over again just using different words. I can't really remember any specific examples, but Dumbledore's conversation with Fate and the argument between Harry and Severus just seemed to drag on and on with very little being said.

    I like the angst and Snape not thinking himself worthy, but that too has dragged on a bit. At this point in the story since Harry wasn't under the influence of anything when he consented I would've expected Snape to be a bit more torn about it rather than so firmly against it. Maybe that's just me.

    All in all you have a good story though. It's different than all the rest and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Kip on August 10, 2009
    First, do let me congratulate you on a truly mesmerising story! You already had Chap 26 posted when I chanced upon it, just one or two tiny points though... Would I be correct in assuming that either you or your beta's are from the States? Nothing wrong with that; however, like me, Harry et al, are English, that is to say native users of UK English rather than American English, and none of us would ever say 'mom', it's just not something we would ever do (unless writing dialogue for an American character, obviously). I noticed it in one of the earlier chapters and it grated against my appreciation of your otherwise entrancing tale like fingernails down a blackboard. The other point is 'treaded', again spotted in one of the earlier chapters. No, no, no! Regardless of how it might be written outside of the sceptered isles, the past tense of the verb 'to tread' is TROD...

    Should you ever consider employing an additional eye to view your Potter-ese before posting, might I humbly offer my services? I just feel that it would be a crying shame to leave any such distractions in what has otherwise been consistently excellent and thoroughly entertaining. In fact, I'm currently up well past my bedtime just because I couldn't resist reading 'just one bit more'... So if I fall asleep at my desk tomorrow, I shall know where to point the finger (me, for being too daft to realise that I should have gone to bed before midnight, and left some for tomorrow!)

    In keen anticipation of the next chapter, and best wishes

    'Purr
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  • From ANON - Sheree on August 09, 2009
    Please tell me there is an end planned for this, sometime, please...

    It has been a real pleasure reading this.
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  • From on August 01, 2009
    wow, this story was amazing!!!! well...IS amazing XD
    i started reading this yesterday and literally couldn't stop!

    the storyline is absolutely wonderful, it caught my eye and just wouldn't stop pulling me in :D
    and you've captured the emotions of all the characters wonderfully
    i especially loved snape's reasoning for not wanting to be with harry (it makes sense, not in an overly cheesey sense, but real-world sense)
    lol, these last few chapters had me bawling my eyes out (but that's a good thing)

    please please please update soon, i simply can't wait to read more!!! you and your betas are doing a brilliant job with this story!
    p.s. could you add me to your mailing list, please? email: sweetdesserts1234@live.com

    thanks
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on July 27, 2009
    wow... well i must say that for every fan section there are works that are good. rare works that are above par from the good stories and then there is the gem of each existing fanfiction section. i will admit i am fairly new to the snarry section and have only combed 12 of the 85 pages but so far u r the gem of this section and i so appreciate the plot and suspence. u make my plot demon sing with all the twists, turns, innovation and rarely straying from the characters original personality that i honestly can't wait for the next chapter. oh n love the humor. thnks for the thrilling experience. until next time. viva la vida!
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  • From ANON - kattemat on July 21, 2009
    Love the story! I really hope Severus will come to his senses, with a new smoking hot sex scene. ^-^ Please email me when you update and keep up the good work
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  • From on July 18, 2009
    OMG! This story is awesome! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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  • From PanonDaur on July 17, 2009
    No D8 No!! Where's the rest?
    Well. I'll just wait... impatiently.
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  • From chibitsubasachan on July 16, 2009
    zomg please update soon! Harry is dying ::pouts:: and Sev is being a prick. I love this story so pleaseeeeeeeee update as soon as you can XD
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