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Reviews for Pains and Contradictions

By : padme82
  • From thedragongly on July 16, 2009
    AH! That's all? I mean, yes I only just started reading this, and as I was trolling through all the sludge on HPfandom looking for something decent I noticed that you had updated, but this is one of those rare gems, Severus is himself, a snarky bastard and seemingly uncaring git. His self control is legendary and you keep it that way, only letting his one person break through to him. Its as it should be, and I WANT MORE! ^.^
    Oh, and by the way, I absolutely love your story, please work hard and update soon!
    And another note, big props to your helpers, I wish I had some...I'm sure that they helped polish the gem before putting it on display for all to see!
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  • From CodyMThomas on July 16, 2009
    To have Remus ask that after that whole mess, I think I would have laughed hysterically too. How much longer can Severus truly hold out? He is literally fighting Fate AND a good thing on this one. They were so happy before, I want Severus to get over himself and go back to that happiness. Slytherins are supposed to take advantage of situations that arise in their favor, and Severus is definitely not acting very Slytherin at the moment. I wonder what it truly will take for him to come to his senses.
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  • From SamHill on July 16, 2009
    Aww, poor Harry. Well, I can't wait for you to be done with Snarry Games so that you can get back to this. I love this story. You'll have to link me to Snarry Games, though, I can see just "who" it is you're cheating on P&C with. ;) Good luck!

    ~Fae
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  • From starstruck86 on July 16, 2009
    Please update again soon. They're bonded. This can't go on much longer, Severus needs to stop being so... I don't know the word. I want to call him daft but he's clearly struggling and that's not fair.

    Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Krysty on July 15, 2009
    How STUPID can Severus be?? I mean, I can understand why he thought that that idea would work, but there is just too much between Remus and Harry that Sev doesn't know! And I'm sorry, Sev, but you are kind of being selfish. I know that you think it's for 'Harry's benefit' and all, but really? Do you see what you are doing to him? "Oh, I need to see him, but he doesn't need to see me because I don't deserve him". Siriusly?? No. That's not right. I hope Harry does the same to Sev.....though Sev doesn't have anyone close enough to him, I suppose.....except maybe Remus....kinda.
    Please Severus, just give Harry a CHANCE to show you that you are worthy of him, of love.
    And of course, this chapter was beautifully written!
    Thank you soo much for sharing this beautiful, emotionally-charged story with all of us!!!!
    And of course, thank you betas!!!!!!!
    *gives everyone cookies*
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  • From thedragongly on July 14, 2009
    I don't understand... where is the rest of it? -chokes on a sob- I need more! You developed the plot and thier characters so well its like looking at the real book. And the pain is so real, I can feel it in my own chest when Harry is hurting, not so much Severus, but maybe thats because I'm more like the boy-hero (except not a boy or a hero!) and it all seems so very real. Please update soon! I don't know what I would do with out more!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 09, 2009
    I vaguely remembered reading this story before but had forgotten most of the details so I re-read the entire story today.
    I ache so much for those two. Hopefully Severus' admittance of needing to see Harry will evolve into needing Harry.
    Great job so far. Keep going!
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  • From stargirl77 on July 09, 2009
    I've spent days just hanging around and avoiding this site, waiting for an update, and here it is! I was so happy and I got out my Kleenex's because I cry during every one of your chapters and I love this story and I hope you update really soon!
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  • From PanonDaur on July 09, 2009
    thankgodthischapterishere! Were my first thoughts when I saw it was updated!

    Well, I'm glad it's here- and I almost cried. And I can't wait for more!
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  • From CodyMThomas on July 09, 2009
    Ok that was a very VERY bad idea on Severus' part. How much longer is he going to let this continue? Does Harry have to try slitting his wrists before he finally sees sense? God the man is hopeless. And I wonder How Harry will feel towards Remus for allowing him to do it to him. I don't see that ending well either. Snape, you truly are an idiot, I hope you get over yourself before it's too late for both of you.
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  • From SamHill on July 09, 2009
    Jeez, Snow, you make me so glad I'm practically incapable of crying. That was just devastating! Is there an end in sight for Harry's (and Severus') suffering?

    Well written, though that's hardly a surprise, given it's you! Thank you for the update!!

    ~Fae
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  • From ANON - polka dot on July 09, 2009
    I hope Remus doesn't get Harry's anger for his part, otherwise harry will lose a necessary friend. This story is so angsty (love that).
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  • From starstruck86 on July 09, 2009
    Oh! *sniffles* Really moving chapter, that was. I don't know who i'm feeling more for.

    Can't wait for the next.
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  • From PanonDaur on June 26, 2009
    Gorgeous- as always!

    I really liked the punch Severus got- think he deserved that one!

    Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From winspearcj on June 25, 2009
    this story was awsome please tell there's more coming i dont think i could continue not knowing what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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