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Reviews for Pains and Contradictions

By : padme82
  • From LadySybylGrey on June 11, 2009
    beautiful story, can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - anon on June 11, 2009
    ch22&23 - fantastic chapters. heartbreakingly angsty w/o any whining. love the intensity of their defense of each other. surely SS will recognize H's constancy?!
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  • From PanonDaur on June 11, 2009
    Another lovely chapter! I'm just sad it wasn't longer! Haha! Still IC as ever! Love the interaction in this chapter. Can't wait for the next!
    -Pan-
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  • From ANON - KillingProphet on June 11, 2009
    Even though I hate a self loathing Snape you managed to make me love this story.
    You are a truly talented writer.
    KP
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  • From ANON - Gestalt on June 10, 2009
    Oh, the angst! I hope that it will all work out for Harry and Severus in the end....
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  • From ANON - Blood Lust 777 on June 10, 2009
    -sniffs, overwhelmed-, Loved this chapter alot, can't wait for the next chapters.


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  • From ANON - polka dot on June 10, 2009
    I think Harry may not have much desire to survive the final battle if he stays too miserable. Severus may be serving the dark lord afterall.
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  • From Darkless on June 10, 2009
    Ooooh... *shudder* the angst! *shivver*

    For me, that's like giving crack to an addict, like giving candy to a diabetic...so bad, but soooooo gooood!! You've got me, hook, line and sinker!

    You keep writing like this, *drool* and I'll keep reading. God, I need a breather after that.

    *pant pant pant*
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  • From ANON - Krysty on June 03, 2009
    .............Oh........My...........Gosh........There are no words that can truly describe how amazing this story is. I. Absobloodylutely. LOVE. It. It was really depressing at first, and I could only read maybe one chapter at a time (I don't do well with depressing. I love it, if it ends well, but I don't do well with it. ^_^). But, as the story moved on, I slowly learned to love it soooo much more. It's awesome. It's moving. It is very well written (Thank you to the betas!). It's the kind of story that I can come home and read a chapter of after a bad day and be happy. It really pulls you in and I really love the long chapters. Thank you (and anyone who helps with it) so very, very much for sharing your *fill in awesome adj here* story with all of us and please see it through to the end. It's so very annoying when authors just stop partway through a story and don't update and come back years later saying, "Sorry! I don't like/don't remember where I was going with this so I'm just going to delete it/not finish it!"
    Thank you very, very much! *hugs and brownies/cookies for you and your helpers!!! ^_^)
    ~Krysty^_~
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  • From ANON - Nemoranda on June 03, 2009
    The first words out of my mouth after I finished reading this chapter was, "wow, that requires a review". Poor Harry. Poor Severus! I tell you, after the wait for 22, I have to say it was one hell of an update. I have eyeliner ALL AROUND my eyes right now. My God...really, just absolutely astounding. Your best chapter to date, I'm sure. I cannot wait for what is to come with chapter 23. Happy writing.
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  • From PanonDaur on June 01, 2009
    This story is wonderful.
    It's sad, but very believeable.

    I really like how you wrote Snape. Usually when Snape finds out he's irreversabley bonded to Harry he's like "LOL-KAY!" and goes on with his merry self. However, I very very much like how you went against that. It makes it so much more believeable.

    I stayed up very late (er early, I should say) reading this. I kept saying "Ok, after the next chapter I'll go to bed.- - no no, the next chapter- NO NO NEXT CHAPTER" Until I got to chapter 22!

    I'm not sure how much more I can say about how wonderful this story is!
    You made both characters so believeable, and your betas have cleaned this up beautifully, and I can't wait for the next chapter :)
    I'm really enjoying keeping up with this.

    I've been reading this for a while, but go away for a while, and come back-- always drawn back by this beautiful fanfiction.

    I'm going to make no guesses how this is going to turn out, but I can only hope for the best!

    Thanks for bringing a fresh take to Snarry fanfiction!
    -PANON-
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  • From GypsyReaper on May 31, 2009
    I love this story alot and i am enjoying the character development please continue to update frequently if you can so that i can feed my inner fangirl
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  • From ANON - Kagome on May 30, 2009
    My God! I think this is the best chapter I have read in months! It was so very emotional ... I laughed and cried ... mostly cried ^^" I have to congratulate you for doing such a marvellous job with that conversation! It's sad how it turned out but I don't think it could have been more perfect! Most of all I enjoyed Harry's outburst! He said so many true things and I'm sinfully happy he had the strength to voice them! I'm also so very angry at Severus though I do understand! I hope that the suffering that's going to come with that separation is going to be enough for him to feel like he has finally atoned for his sins! And ohh I know there's going to be quite a lot of suffering! I can't begin to describe to you how eagerly I'm looking forward to a new chapter!!!
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  • From Sahira on May 28, 2009
    I haven't been reading this for a while and because of that can't really remember what happened before this latest chapter:( But anywho, cried from the start to the end:( Why oh why can't Severus give in! Angst sucks! Lovely chapter, very well written and I loved the end where AD tells his own tale about lost love:( Keep up the good work and the chapters coming!:D
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  • From on May 28, 2009
    OMG... I totally had to stop reading this halfway through because I was STUNNED?! (lol) I'm doing The Dead Parrot for a school play that is made up of skits. I just had to mention the coincidence! I'm loving this story so far!


    TianaMae
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