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Reviews for Pains and Contradictions

By : padme82
  • From jddammann on December 21, 2008
    3/4 of the way through. Please Severus, do it, accept it, Merlin how long do we have to wait before one of them at least says something? :-) Loving the story, and now finishing the chapter.
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  • From jddammann on December 21, 2008
    I haven't even read the chapter, but how could someone at this point or after the description ask if this story was gen or slash? And by the way, who cares? This story is so well thought out and executed, what does it matter? :-) Anyway, going to read the next chapter now.
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  • From jddammann on December 20, 2008
    Absolutely brilliant! The exchanges at the Weasley house, the exchanges between Harry and Lupin, AND the exchange between Lupin and Malfoy! Not to mention the talk between Albus and Severus, and of course within the Wealey home, Harry and Hermione! I hope Harry understands it better later, well he must or he and Severus will never be.

    No tissues this time. :-)
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  • From jddammann on December 20, 2008
    Well, there goes another box of tissue before its time. It was a wonderful chapter, I hope its not from too much experience of funerals, but when and if I have to have one this would be it.

    The interaction between Harry, Severus, Remus, and Dumbledore leading up to the funeral was priceless. You have them down pat. I look forward to more Harry and Severus, and everyone in the next chapter!
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  • From CanadianGinger on December 11, 2008
    That was an amazing chapter. :) I can't get enough of this story.
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  • From Amarilis on December 11, 2008
    Hi there. I was having a break from studying and I thought it would be nice to read a chapter of a new story. But once I started I could not stop until I finished!!!
    I really like this story! i like the way Harry's feelings are developing towards Severus and the fact that he hasn't figured out what he feels yet. I really really really want to read the next chapter so PLEASE please please update soon!! :-)

    Amarilis
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  • From QueSeraSera on December 09, 2008
    Hey! You know, I've been reading this story since about chapter 14 came out, and... I really should have reviewed before, but I couldn't think of anything to say. I sort of still can't, but here goes tryin'... this is perhaps my one of my favorite fanfics EVER. I only remember reading say, one other fanfic that affected me this much since I started reading fanfics when I was about 13, and that was about 11 years ago. Your writing style is something like prose, the pace is well-timed, there's an excellent plot, there's a PLOT to begin with, I'm perfectly fine with there being a minimum of smut thus far--and that is saying something--, the character representations are believable and faithful, and above all, it's just a beautiful story. Even if you never updated again, this would still be worth rereading again. I mean, I hope you do update, as I really can't wait to see what happens next. But what I'm trying to say is, I think you're an awesome writer, and this is a great story. I'm impressed, slightly jealous, and now a FAN. Keep up the good work, and good luck with the next chapter! =D
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  • From Darkless on December 06, 2008
    Hehehe, Severus may be keeping Harry, but Severus is also a keeper! Mmmm, the Master of 'Tall, Dark and Snark'.
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  • From SamHill on December 02, 2008
    Oooh, one of the best chapters yet! Well, they're all great, but still. It was very exciting to see the email about the update!! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.

    p.s. usually I have more to write, but I'm work and trying not to be obvious about not... working. You've a done a great job with the story.
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  • From ANON - AkaneIkeda on December 02, 2008
    I just love your story. It
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  • From mollycrown on December 02, 2008
    Lovely long chapter, very happy! Thanks for adding me to the mailing list too, since I have a terrible memory for checking for updates! ^__^ Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Alaine on December 02, 2008
    Just found your story last night, and I've read all fifteen chapters ever since. I finally thought about dropping a review, as a story like this certainly deserves one.

    I absolutely love (and with a lot of gratitude) that you chose to keep Harry and Severus in character. They don't fall in love at first sight, they don't first argue and th
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  • From mollycrown on November 28, 2008
    Hey!!

    Just want to say that I'm really enjoying this story! I don't usually read WIP's but the first chapter had me hooked. I really like your style of writing, you have a way of saying things so that they all make perfect sense and are completely believable. I adore your Harry and your Snape, and I can even stomach your Dumbledore (he usully makes me feel ill!!).

    I don't usually reivew much, but I felt this deserved it. You are doing an awesome job on this fic, which contains some not unusual themes, but are done exceptionally well; I especially like how Harry sees Ron in his dreams and their particular conversations.

    Anyway, I would love to be on your update list: mudogxxx@hotmail.com

    Thank you for writing this! I was almost ready to give up on the Snarry fandom, but you have saved me!! ^___^


    Mu xxx
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  • From nekluvshp on November 07, 2008
    You have converted me into a Harry/Snape fan. I almost hated this pairing before but now..... wow.
    There are no words that can properly praise you for the ingenuity of this story.
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  • From ANON - eldorna on October 26, 2008
    I read the whole thing in one sitting, and I have to say that was a mistake because I was sobbing like a child most of the time. This is really an excellent story. I love the way you have Harry balancing his grief and the situations around him. It is both realistic and in character. I also must say that I appreciate the fact that Harry and Severus didn't just hop into the sack right off, though I am looking forward to that part, because the slow progression makes it more believable and intimate. Please continue soon. Hugs!
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